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A Whisper's Caress
Senior Member

since 2000-11-03

Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

0 posted 2001-10-29 12:03 PM

Southern Breeze

On a breeze of southern gentility
he caressed her heart with lyrical verse of
romance and passion

a whispering of his yearnings
imbibed her spirit with a
knowing of intimacy from an
age of long ago

he, being cloaked in the love and
devotion for a woman, placed his
most desirous deliberations on a
pedestal for all to view

she, snared in the furrows of his
parchment, dreamed of the notion
of obtaining his heart

having felt the touch of his hand
within her being, she can now only
smile, though saddened, at the blanket of
endearment he drapes over someone
else’s bedrail

10-29-01

my best to you, dear friend

Look into the eyes of a man and
you will find the soul of the woman
who loves him...

[This message has been edited by A Whisper's Caress (edited 10-29-2001).]

Wanda
Member

since 2001-10-23

Posts 461

1 posted 2001-10-29 12:40 PM

I thoroughly enjoyed this poem. Good writing. Wanda

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

2 posted 2001-10-29 01:07 PM

having felt the touch of his hand
within her being, she can now only
smile, though saddened, at the blanket of
endearment he drapes over someone
else’s bedrail

Do I know you? *S* For you sure know me... or others in like boats. *S*

I enjoyed this very much...

DawnG

Senior Member

since 2000-06-23

Posts 1494
United States

3 posted 2001-10-29 01:27 PM

A Whisper's Caress,

This is a very beautiful beginning to my day.

Dawn

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

4 posted 2001-10-29 02:29 PM

Wow !! I really liked this!! Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

5 posted 2001-10-29 04:31 PM

Wow! No this one speaks volumes, indeed. Well done, and a fine turn at the finale

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

A Whisper's Caress
Senior Member

since 2000-11-03

Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

6 posted 2001-10-29 08:24 PM

taking bows....thank you all.

interloper, what no senryu????
gosh.....

kidding

Look into the eyes of a man and
you will find the soul of the woman
who loves him...

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

7 posted 2001-10-30 02:04 PM

Perhaps, he should get a new blanket. Loved the essence of this poem, captured and received.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2001-10-30 03:49 PM

This makes me think of a woman that I fell in love with and she suddenly pulled away from me taking her beautiful soul to other places...James

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

9 posted 2001-10-30 08:43 PM

Oh, this was good!!! Fabulous write. In my opinion things like this happen all too often these days. May your friend find the love she deserves.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

10 posted 2001-10-30 08:44 PM

Beautiful, but sad. Love's breezes come and go, kind of like EZ come, EZ go.

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