Open Poetry #16 |
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My Travels: Cape Breton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada ![]() |
My Travels: Cape Breton I've sat upon the highest cliff of The Cabot Trail Laughed with joy while watching the clouds from an approaching gale As breathing deep of salty air, the freshest ever known I've listened to the eagle's cry as overhead he's flown I've played upon the golden sands, built castles to the sky I swam the cold Atlantic waves and laughed with childish cry This is the place I learned to dream on lonely summer days In a world of wind, sand and sea playing in golden rays Karen Torbiak 2001© Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
This was a very good read!!!!!!! |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very beautiful, Karen. Sandra |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
Thank you for taking me away for a few moments today..... -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Now I do understand so well why you like the mountains by the seashore....Done so well Karen....Nicely expressed....Easy to see in my minds eye. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
WindWalker...Thank you so much. I am glad you liked it. My father grew up on Cape Breton Island. We went there most summers. ![]() Sandra....This is the place where I learned to love storms and cliffs and the ocean. I learned to dream on lazy summer days. ![]() Lady of Shallot....*sigh* though it has been almost 30 years since I have been there still the images I can see are as fresh as this wonderful picture you have found for me. Thank you so much. It is perfect. **hugs** Magnus....I am glad you can see the romance in my words, my friend. Cape Breton holds many special memories for me from a childhood where there were few times I was at peace. ![]() Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Another very good poem. Thank you. |
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Robert A Member
since 2001-10-29
Posts 174 |
since I've traveled the world over, I liked this a lot! |
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