Open Poetry #16 |
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Potpouri of Flower FIlled Feelings |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone ![]() |
Sometimes she feels rosy, blush of pink, unfolding petals Others, a darkened violet, weeping late into the night. Today she touches lillies in her mind, beauiful sad Tomorrow, perhaps Carnations, with hope within her sight Lilacs misty fragrance filling thoughts with childhood remains Gardenia dreams soft scented, pass through gently now and then Flourishing Orchid she can be, when given half a chance Lately lavender feels better, more of a soothing friend. |
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Robert A Member
since 2001-10-29
Posts 174 |
well, this is a little flowery for a guy, but it's nice poetry, love those images and phrasing |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (smiles) And when your sweet romeo sweeps you off your feet, he will fill the vase in your heart with so many roses and forget-me-nots and freesia! (smiles) I LOVE IT, IT"S SO BEAUTIFUL!!! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Excellent expressions Sandra....I loved the flowery approach....Nicely done. |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
funny. . . I've always thought of her as orchids. . . ![]() great job Sandra. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sandra...This is wonderfully done. Enjoyed! ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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