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walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-10-29 07:39 AM

I'm loving you
just like I dreamed you
tasting your sweetness
With every kiss
giving me
some of your sensuality
I just want to be here
with you
I don't need no other
this love's part of me
Don't run away
stay
Let me love you this way
I need you
just like I dreamed you
I desire
everything that's you
Give me your love
stay with me love
Let me with our love
draw a perfect picture
of us.

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

1 posted 2001-10-29 07:56 AM

a lot of longing in this one...

enjoyed..

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"what if jesus comes back like that..will he cry when he sees where our hearts are at?..." c.raye

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

2 posted 2001-10-29 10:10 AM

WOW!!!Your yearning call comes through very strongly in this wonderful poem. I am sure she will not be able to help staying to enjoy the love you offer her. Well done.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

WindWalker
Senior Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 1218

3 posted 2001-10-29 11:21 AM

This was a very good read!!!!!!!

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

4 posted 2001-10-29 01:46 PM

Let me with our love
draw a perfect picture
of us

Be sure and use lots of read. I really liked this one, walker.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

5 posted 2001-10-29 01:51 PM

walker - well now, if I were her, I would be saying "okay !!"..."yes !!"...."uh-huh" very good. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2001-10-29 01:56 PM

Great write! Enjoyed! ~hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

7 posted 2001-10-30 11:41 PM

Walker,

this is very beatiful. aching
and longing in this piece...you
write wonderfully m'friend. great
emotions concerning your love.

take care.
amy

"I could kiss you in
the rain forever.
Turn all of your pain to pleasure
Fill up your days with
sunlight, make the
passion last every night"

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