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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Hello Passions, I apologize for not coming back with a poem and all.....I just needed to feel right before I write or post something and now that I'm feeling fine about my creativity...now, may the rhymes flow.....enjoy! Good morning America...... to a whole new world, our new home, as we're stuck in this post-crisis syndrome while the death rate escalates as, the time of war, is soaring as, huge, black, stratus clouds situate above the world as, black rain is pouring.... Good afternoon.... as America and I, shall sing a mornful tune for those who lost a loved one on that day in September and to the heroes, your courageousness, we'll always remember as Sept. 11th, has provided me with a deeper perspective on life like, I know my existance, will be the best gift on christmas night. Good evening.... I must reiterate that, I'm proud to be breathing but, as I turn on the news, my conscious can't help but view that, there maybe more to this situation than what meets the eye like, what if the gov't, is combining half the truth with white lies? And God forbid, if these anthrax attacks, are aided by an inside job cause, if speculation becomes fact, then please help us God! Goodnight..... as the anthrax, is like, a plaque continuing to spread til one, hundreds, and maybe thousands end up dead and I can't help but think that, we played with fire and got burned for sticking our noses&ears, in external affairs that wasn't our concern as Osama and co. wants to hurt this, leave us out in the cold, shirtless as, we're witnessing part of his scheme, to wipe us off the surface.... forcing us to retaliate, behind our superior, military force while the fate of mankind, takes on a whole new course as my concept for world peace, has been crush by hate, a deadly force as my heart and soul echoes, deep sorrow and heavy remorse. Good morning, good afternoon, good evening, and goodnight... America, turning a tradegy into a war, is simply not right. Good morning, good afternoon, goodnight and right back to dawn.... when the smoke clears, we'll finally see that, Satan has won..... so america, I need your utmost attention, I need you to understand me.... remember that, no matter who wins the war, it's still a loss for humanity! [This message has been edited by Nate Dogg (edited 10-28-2001).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Nate. Very very well expressed!! An excellent write Sir poet. Nancy. ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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DawnG 
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Nate, You sure have seemed to get a grasp on your creativity here. Great message you have placed upon us here. Dawn |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Hey Nate! I really love this. Your words flow so wonderfully my partner in rhyme , hehe ohhh guess what? You have won the honor of receiving my 400th post! : ) |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Wow, you hold so much to think about in this piece. Particularly the Goodnight portion. I have wondered some of these thoughts. I do not have the answers and I do not know the truth, but there is much to think about so america, I need your utmost attention, I need you to understand me.... remember that, no matter who wins the war, it's still a loss for humanity! And those are the most truthful words of all. Well written poem, and much to ponder If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Guess thats why they call it war...or an active hostility... As the song goes...War...what is it good for...absolutely nothing...James |
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DYME Member
since 2000-07-29
Posts 104Texas |
That was very touching. I'm not crazy...I have papers to prove it!! |
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