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Lucie
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since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077
Houston

0 posted 2001-10-28 04:53 PM


It seems I've got a reputation for treating Larry mean,
Don't judge this book by cover, check the pages inbetween.
I have a heart filled up with love, just bursting at the seems
A mouth thats quick to throw a joke, a mind thats full of dreams.

I am no different then the other poets you see here
I dream of love, I write of hope, I try to spred my cheer.
I will not hurt his feelings... (much),.... please let go your fear..
I'm not a really wicked girl... just ask that Balladeer.

And if you have a doubt about the romance that I hold.
Just use your smart search button.. Lucie's story will unfold.
There aren't any poems there that would bring riches if they sold
But I can hold my own in here... I'm pretty good I'm told.

It's just been my philosophy that laughter can cure all.
you'll never break a funny bone if you should chance to fall.
And its never been much fun I know just holding up a wall
So I stand up on my box once more and shout COME ONE COME ALL.


© Copyright 2001 Lucille Dobbins - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

1 posted 2001-10-28 05:30 PM


Hi Lucie! Nice to see you again! I enjoyed your poem very much!
Larry C
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Member Patricius
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286
United States
2 posted 2001-10-28 07:29 PM


Lucie,
Nice touch! By the way, all is in good clean fun. And bless you for it.  

Midnitesun
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since 2001-05-18
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Gaia
3 posted 2001-10-28 10:25 PM


Lucie, this sure looks like a challenge to all.  You are quite the instigator! By tomorrow, the "I Love Lucie (and Larry)" series should be in full swing...

can I be sued for this bit of title thievery?
do we have any lawyers out there? I am not who I say I am, and no one has my photo, and even the FBI can't find me. (Just ask Marge and Larry.)

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
4 posted 2001-10-28 10:42 PM


Let the fun begin!  Is Larry really up to it?  I hear Lucie can hold her own!  Nancy.

  ~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Startime
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since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
Canada
5 posted 2001-10-29 08:42 AM


You just go ahead and have some fun with Larry.....your talent will ensure you come out a winner of the first order. *giggling* This is all in fun and games and you are doing great. BRAVO!!!!Lets give a cheer for Lucie.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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