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Mistletoe Angel

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Portland, Oregon

0 posted 2001-10-28 11:22 AM

Magic Of Kissing Senryu
By: Noah Eaton
10/28/01

Swimming On Satin

Swimming on satin
Resting a happy head down
Sighing in loves joy

Silk Thoughts

Two lovers kissing
For the first time in their lives
Fainting in rapture

Lovers Wish

That night you kissed me
I smile in bed, dreaming
To kiss you once more

Serendipity

Falling in her arms
When I least expected it
Kissing her dearly

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2001-10-28 12:14 PM

Noah! You are such a romantic!! Now it's your 18th birthday and you can have all the girls kiss you!! Beautiful write!
Hugs, Nancy.

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

2 posted 2001-10-28 12:14 PM

Noah, your heart always shines. Lovely words.
Sandra

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

3 posted 2001-10-28 12:38 PM

*sigh*So very romantic. Well done, Noah.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-10-28 12:41 PM

Breathtaking and romantic thoughts, Noah. Nice work!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2001-10-28 01:06 PM

Noah,
Nice, enjoyed the read.

The Rusty Knight
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 414
Texas

6 posted 2001-10-28 03:00 PM

Wow to be 18 and be able to write like this.

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

DawnG

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since 2000-06-23

Posts 1494
United States

7 posted 2001-10-28 03:33 PM

Noah,

A big *kiss* for you on your 18th birthday. Sorry, I'd do a smilie, but I don't know how. LOL

Dawn

Denise

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since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

8 posted 2001-10-28 04:42 PM

Beautifully expressed, Noah! Lovely thoughts! Happy Birthday!

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

9 posted 2001-10-28 08:17 PM

~Happy Birthday, Noah!~

I love these senryus - how beautiful!

You never cease to impress or move me!

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

10 posted 2001-10-28 08:52 PM

Well now, who's a romantic soul on his birthday??? Beautiful Noah, and a big happy birthday kiss to you.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Temptress

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since 1999-06-15

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Mobile, AL

11 posted 2001-10-28 09:04 PM

It seems like I have forgotten the power of a kiss. This gives me hope to find it again. I love this!

Sometimes the heart needs the solace of solitude and silence.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

12 posted 2001-10-29 02:15 AM

These are nice...James

Domzi
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since 2001-09-08

Posts 288
New York (BK)

13 posted 2001-10-29 02:40 AM

I love reading your senyrus.
You are such a romantic!
Reading this one had me
thinking of all the magical
kisses that keep me wanting
more.

As my borough has always stated- Do or Die.

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