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his inner peace
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his inner peace |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida 
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a poetic soul is his-- he longs to fly it free... with passionate tongue he rages-- he claims his honesty... a romantic heart urges him to seek his missing piece for a puzzle complete... so he searches to find his inner peace... -dgvarner 10-28-01 "those who would seek to wound, i cannot hear..." [This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 10-28-2001).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big huggsssssss) Oh my gosh, this is soooooo beautiful! (smiles) This is a feeling I can relate to so very much, for I dream to fall in love and I love writing poetry! (sigh) Soooooo gorgeous, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) Muah! (smiles) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dgvarner, An excellent write. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
thank you sweet NOAH..  i'm glad you enjoyed this one  SEYMOUR..i thank you friend hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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rascalx Senior Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 590Florence, SC, USA |
WOW I'm speechless and I'm touched. "a romantic heart urges him to seek his missing piece for a puzzle complete... so he searches to find his inner peace..." I couldn't say it any better. Thank you for reading my mind and heart. still in search of a dream come true and wondering if that dream is you.. - Jeff "People say I should learn some self control; but I just want to exorcise my soul" |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
JEFF..simple it was...but i'm glad you liked it.. search your heart and sift your soul to fill the empty aching hole kiss away the world today they know not what their words can say if they wound you carry on dont let them move you like a pawn you know your worth you know your heart your soul i find a piece of art the love you seek will come to you the kind of love thats known to few so listen not to sputtered speech perhaps their jealousy just cannot reach the man that i can... -dgvarner impromptu 10-28-01 ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ "what if jesus comes back like that..will he cry when he sees where our hearts are at?..." c.raye [This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 10-28-2001).] |
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rascalx Senior Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 590Florence, SC, USA |
"kiss away the world today"  I love that line!  Thank you, Gale - lv, - Jeff "People say I should learn some self control; but I just want to exorcise my soul" |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
This is one for the library I think, excellent! "Let me pierce the realm of glamour |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
JEFF..then kiss away! lol EAGLE..library?  cool... thanks for reading friend!hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Dgvarner, Both of your poems in this thread are very beautiful. Thank you for sharing them with us. Dawn |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I, very much, relate to the heart of this and hope that I will prove to live up to it's soul. |
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Keith Morgan Member
since 2001-10-29
Posts 114Md |
Outstanding read!!!!!!!!! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
We all need to find our inner peace...James |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
thanks so much DAWN!.. DUNCAN..i'm glad you enjoyed reading me KIETH..thanks a bunch for "outstanding"!  yes we do JAMES...thanks for reading hugs, g |
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