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Undying Love (a sonnet)
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Undying Love (a sonnet) |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA 
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Undying Love My heart sings a song of undying love Thanking the generous lord up above For sending an angel like you to me For showing me what it means to be free I have never known such amazing bliss Drawn from your warm lip’s, a tender sweet kiss With one touch, passion burns deep in my soul Your love fills me softly, making me whole. I dream of the day I’ll become your bride Standing tall with pride and love by your side Waking every morn knowing you are there Seeing in your dark eyes how much you care On this enternal love we will rely As our lifetime together passes by Love you Dave  |
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janmew Member
since 2001-10-27
Posts 134Canada |
Simply beautiful. It has a good flow to it, nice rhyming, and is FULL of sentiment! Well done! Jan Poetry is an expression of feelings. I do not write poems, but rather, the poems use me to write themselves. [This message has been edited by janmew (edited 10-27-2001).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Oh gosh...I love love poems and I love sonnets and you have given me both in one. Dave must be tickled pink.   Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
janmew - I'm glad you liked it Thanks for taking the time to stop in.Startime - I'm not experienced in sonnets yet.. this is only my 4th one...*chuckles* They are fun but challanging... I'm glad you enjoyed it Thanks Dave hasn't had the chance to see it yet... he is currently having computer problems..  But hopefully he will be able to come and see the poem Don't marry for money... You can borrow it cheaper! |
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NapalmsConstantlyConfused
since 2001-05-15
Posts 529 |
tickled pink? hmmmmm... nope.... happy? yes, definitely  well, honey, again you astonish me - yes i can tell stories, but i can't do THIS at all :P so there. eventually i really will get around to writing a sonnet for you, honestly. as soon as i can figure out why my computer seems so determined to be a Commodore-64 Emulator, blue screen and all. love you too, dear  -Napalm |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
ahhh...isn't love grand? Wonderful and sweet, my friend. *hugs* Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Dave - I'm glad you liked it  And you aren't the only one who is happy Love you Micheal - Thank you  I couldn't have done it without you. Thank you |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Ah, beautiful love. You sound very happy, and it shines through in your poetry. Just lovely. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) OH MY GOSH, THIS IS SOOOOOO BEAUTIFUL, SWEET TARA!!! (smiles) You will be his loving bride, and he will love you forever! (sigh) I love sonnets so much too, you are writing them so very well, I'm proud of you! (smiles) Makes me feel like writing another one! (kiss on cheek) Muah! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tara, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
hey. . . you're getting better at these. . . no fair!!! LOLreally Tara, this is great, from your heart. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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