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0 posted 2001-10-27 08:18 PM



Undying Love

My heart sings a song of undying love
Thanking the generous lord up above
For sending an angel like you to me
For showing me what it means to be free

I have never known such amazing bliss
Drawn from your warm lip’s, a tender sweet kiss
With one touch, passion burns deep in my soul
Your love fills me softly, making me whole.

I dream of the day I’ll become your bride
Standing tall with pride and love by your side
Waking every morn knowing you are there
Seeing in your dark eyes how much you care

On this enternal love we will rely
As our lifetime together passes by






Love you Dave



© Copyright 2001 Tara Baldridge - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-10-27 08:23 PM


Simply beautiful. It has a good flow to it, nice rhyming, and is FULL of sentiment! Well done!

Jan

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2 posted 2001-10-27 08:25 PM


Oh gosh...I love love poems and I love sonnets and you have given me both in one. Dave must be tickled pink.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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3 posted 2001-10-27 09:35 PM


janmew - I'm glad you liked it Thanks for taking the time to stop in.

Startime -   I'm not experienced in sonnets yet.. this is only my 4th one...*chuckles* They are fun but challanging... I'm glad you enjoyed it Thanks      Dave hasn't had the chance to see it yet... he is currently having computer problems.. But hopefully he will be able to come and see the poem

Don't marry for money...  You can borrow it cheaper!

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4 posted 2001-10-27 11:47 PM


tickled pink? hmmmmm... nope.... happy? yes, definitely  
well, honey, again you astonish me - yes i can tell stories, but i can't do THIS at all :P so there.

eventually i really will get around to writing a sonnet for you, honestly. as soon as i can figure out why my computer seems so determined to be a Commodore-64 Emulator, blue screen and all.

love you too, dear  
-Napalm

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5 posted 2001-10-27 11:53 PM


ahhh...isn't love grand?  Wonderful and sweet, my friend. *hugs*  

Michael

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6 posted 2001-10-27 11:56 PM


Dave - I'm glad you liked it And you aren't the only one who is happy   Love you

Micheal - Thank you I couldn't have done it without you. Thank you

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7 posted 2001-10-28 12:02 PM


Ah, beautiful love. You sound very happy, and it shines through in your poetry. Just lovely.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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8 posted 2001-10-28 11:38 AM




(sigh) OH MY GOSH, THIS IS SOOOOOO BEAUTIFUL, SWEET TARA!!! (smiles) You will be his loving bride, and he will love you forever! (sigh) I love sonnets so much too, you are writing them so very well, I'm proud of you! (smiles) Makes me feel like writing another one! (kiss on cheek) Muah! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tara, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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9 posted 2001-10-28 04:25 PM


hey. . . you're getting better at these. . .    no fair!!!  LOL

really Tara, this is great, from your heart. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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