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Aimster
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0 posted 2001-10-27 03:12 PM


Last Night
AMK
October 26 2001

Sunshine streams through window bright
Darkness of night gives way to light
Birds are singing in frosty air
Trees now changing will soon be bare

Stumbling over to the coffee pot
I replay memories of last night in my mind
Last night was nothing short of pure magic
As though someone for a moment stopped time

Your bared your heart
I gave you my soul
You broke through the chains
We made each other whole

Passion gave way to love
Friendship turned into much more
The smile I could hear in your voice
Gave wings to my heart, and made me soar

We had a beautiful night indeed
I pray that this is just the beginning
Of a path that is meant to be
And of a love that is never-ending

"I could kiss you in
the rain forever.
Turn all of your pain to pleasure
Fill up your days with
sunlight, make the
passion last every night"

© Copyright 2001 Amy Kennedy - All Rights Reserved
catalinamoon
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1 posted 2001-10-27 04:11 PM


Lovely, Amy,I hope it is forever..
Sandra

Startime
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2 posted 2001-10-27 04:44 PM


The magic of your words gives your love and enchanted feel to it. I love the way this poem is expressed. Well done.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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3 posted 2001-10-27 04:51 PM


May there be many more nights like this with that special one!

XOXO,
RP

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