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SmartChick
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
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On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2001-10-26 11:52 PM


You tell us that she is sick
To judge, not to be so quick
Then you say we have to choose
You don't even have any clues
As to how this makes us feel
To you our feelings aren't real
All you give is just a big speech
Saying practice what you preach
You always said to be forgiving
This isn't what you're living
You make yourself look better
Bur she's always a go getter
So stop holding all the grudges
There are already plenty of judges
© By Sue 10/26/01



© Copyright 2001 Sue Graves - All Rights Reserved
Rodney Belcher
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since 2000-06-06
Posts 227
Taylor, Michigan
1 posted 2001-10-26 11:57 PM


love the angst here...and it is amazing how we often forget what it was to be young...I hope I never forget the feeling of being young and feeling trapped in a world that I was unsure of...thanks for bringing me back to earth...

Lets Love one another and let God do the worrying,
Rodney

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since 2001-03-07
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2 posted 2001-10-27 10:35 AM


Now this was good, what is it they say? "Judge not, less you be judged?"  This was a poem with a lot of pertinent wisdom.

~*~  Carpe' Diem  ~*~

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