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Aimster
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0 posted 2001-10-26 10:28 PM


Carolina Breeze
AMK
October 25 2001


It's in the sweet Carolina breeze
That I see the beauty of who you are
East to West...and back again
I look up at that one solitary star

The Carolina breeze is warm and light
As it gently brushes against my face
For a moment in time
I'm transcended to some other place

The ocean in all her Glory
Looks back at me as I sit on this sand dune tonight
I am bathed in moonlight streaming
As it washes over me in heavenly light

It's in the Carolina breeze
That each day turns into tomorrow
The Carolina breeze calms my fears
It eases all of my sorrows

I sit here on the shore
Watching the Sea in all her thunder and roar
It's on the Carolina breeze
That my heart and soul do soar

Looking out at the Ocean so blue
The Carolina breeze sings a familiar tune
Stars twinkle from high above
Basking in the glow of the Carolina moon

"I could kiss you in
the rain forever.
Turn all of your pain to pleasure
Fill up your days with
sunlight, make the
passion last every night"

© Copyright 2001 Amy Kennedy - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-10-26 10:40 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Awwwwww, this is so so beautiful! (smiles) I've never been to Carolina, but I dream ever so much of going to Columbia and up the coast and feeling the breeze! (smiles) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amy, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Tracey
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2 posted 2001-10-26 10:50 PM


Send some of that warm Carolina breeze up here Amy, cause it's friggin cold here today!! Seriously, this is beautiful writing and wonderful imagery. Wish I was there

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Janet Marie
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3 posted 2001-10-27 01:21 AM


Beautiful Amy....just lovely...
from someone whos never seen the ocean...
you have my envy..
it has got to be the most fab place to think and find inspiration...like you did here
Classic Amy poetry here ... well done girlie  

This distance has shown how the road remains alone
Now I'm looking in my life ... for a truth that is my own.

Kevin
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4 posted 2001-10-27 01:44 AM


I love the carolina breeze   even all the way up here @ clemson

hope all is well with you amy
take care
kev

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