Open Poetry #16 |
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Sand, Surf and Sensuality |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA ![]() |
Strolling down a sand covered road, listening to crashing waves. The call of birds echoing that dinner has arrived once again. Laughter of a child, intermixed with shrieks of joy. A distant bell tolling a new day, calling love to the dunes. Two lovers, filled with passion and sexual energy walk away. Away from the crowds, the scrutiny of eyes, in search of a moment. Trying desperately to escape into their own world of passion. Hurrying ever faster as the energies of their love flows within. Dropping, retrieving, giggling as they run, eyes shining a familiar glimmer. Desperate for a moment to become one, to express sighs, to love. Hunger only of the tenderness of an embrace, a kiss shared. Breathlessly in love, lusting for a timeless dance of two souls. The warmth of a blanket covering skins soft, hiding a touch. A futile attempt to keep invading granules of sand away. Brushing tears of joy from each face, tasting a torrid kiss. Eyes closed against the light of day, seeing only through touches. Touches shared after moments of bliss, sleepiness invading minds. Dozing as one while dreams float with the clouds above. Two minds share contentment and joy, love grows strong. A pair of shadows depart the dunes, passions sated. Universal love enjoyed in nature’s arms as sands cover a trail. |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Just sitting there writing my fantasy, hm? Nothing like love on the beach, its the perfect combination. Sandra |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thanx Sandra, one of my favorites too. Here I am, live within 30 miles of the Ocean and well..... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
It's freezing up here in the great white north! ![]() ![]() Good write Magnus. ~warm hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thanx Nancy....that is why this southern boy stayed south....I don't have to flap my wings and head south for the winter... |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
oh I do love this one ![]() |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Missed you being around recently....Hope your business was fruitful. thanx Sue. |
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Wanda Member
since 2001-10-23
Posts 461 |
Magnus; Ooooooh, I like this one. I am sure many of us who live in the cold north are oooohing and awwwwwwing about the beach and the sand. Enjoy it for the rest of us, please. Wanda |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Niiiiiice... ~Tier |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Wanda....even us down south types are feeling some of your cold air right now. Not exactly weather to take a dip in... though it would still be a nice day to go to the beach and snuggle next to a warm fire while roasting corn and boiling a bucket of clams, crab and oysters..... Now I am getting hungry.... |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Tier....Thanx...Magnus |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* all the things one needs to share a time of total romance. Well done, Magnus. As usual your poem flows softly with a feeling of love and sensuality. *sigh* I love it. ![]() Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed this beach time...James |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thanx Karen, just another little relaxing romp in the dunes...Can you smell the air? |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thanx James...tis fun to be near the ocean. Except when the hurricans come romping thru. |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (sigh) Your beautiful visions of love always shine from your loving heart, sweet friend! (smiles) I love the ocean, and too have many dreams of sharing sunrises and sunsets with the girl of my dreams on the beach! (sigh) BRAVO!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Magnus, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Noah, thanx, now go write a seaside romance. I know everyone will enjoy it. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
why do I have to live in Indiana? ![]() Kathleen |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Oh I do feel sorry for you...especially right about now....Brrrrrr.... Thanx. |
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