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BtwnRockandHardPlace
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0 posted 2001-10-26 01:40 PM







When I think of you
My heart races
My skin flushes
A gentle pink

And my lips moisten
Like the petals of a rose
As I await your kiss

When I think of you
I loose my breath
My body tingles
In Anticipation

I long for you
To hold me in your strong arms
We are the perfect fit

As lovers bodies entwine
and passion removes our fears
We open up and let go

To feel the joy building
Slowly to a rapture
That only two can feel

Who give to each other
From their souls
Completely to satisfy
and express feelings
Which reach beyond words

When I think of you
I dream of the ecstasy
That I know only you can bring

As you touch my body
and slowly caress and explore
each supple recess and take me
to that special place

A place only deeply bonded lovers
Can know
The place where only you and I
Exist
In
Perfect
Unending
Love



*~*~*~*~
Benita
*~*~*~*~
The truth of the matter is that you always know the right thing to do. The hard part is doing it.
-Gen. Schwarzkoff



[This message has been edited by BtwnRockandHardPlace (edited 10-26-2001).]

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RosePetal
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1 posted 2001-10-26 02:11 PM


Oh yes, I know this feeling very well!
I enjoyed this!

xoxo

Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2001-10-26 02:17 PM


In perfect unending love.....
beautiful.........*s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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Deep in the heart
3 posted 2001-10-26 02:17 PM


Unending?  Not even for a sip of wine?  No time outs? WOW!

I love it!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Nightshade
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just out of reach
4 posted 2001-10-26 02:40 PM


Very sensual..nice. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Rodney Belcher
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5 posted 2001-10-26 02:44 PM


ahhh to be young and in love again...heck I'd take either at this juncture in my life...

Lets Love one another-let God do the worrying,
Rodney

[This message has been edited by Rodney Belcher (edited 10-26-2001).]

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6 posted 2001-10-26 09:04 PM


Done so well.....the expressions were awesome.
I am envious of you.  You put together a
package that speaks love so loudly.

Chelsea~
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7 posted 2001-10-26 09:32 PM



Now, this is really
lovely - presentation
and words  
I really enjoyed ~~~
BTW, is that Claire De Lune?

BtwnRockandHardPlace
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 98
NJ, USA
8 posted 2001-10-26 09:36 PM


"BTW, is that Claire De Lune?"


YES - it is!!  

*~*~*~*~
Benita
*~*~*~*~
The truth of the matter is that you always know the right thing to do. The hard part is doing it.
-Gen. Schwarzkoff

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