Open Poetry #16 |
![]() ![]() |
When I Think of You |
![]() ![]() ![]() |
BtwnRockandHardPlace Member
since 2001-10-23
Posts 98NJ, USA ![]() |
![]() When I think of you My heart races My skin flushes A gentle pink And my lips moisten Like the petals of a rose As I await your kiss When I think of you I loose my breath My body tingles In Anticipation I long for you To hold me in your strong arms We are the perfect fit As lovers bodies entwine and passion removes our fears We open up and let go To feel the joy building Slowly to a rapture That only two can feel Who give to each other From their souls Completely to satisfy and express feelings Which reach beyond words When I think of you I dream of the ecstasy That I know only you can bring As you touch my body and slowly caress and explore each supple recess and take me to that special place A place only deeply bonded lovers Can know The place where only you and I Exist In Perfect Unending Love *~*~*~*~ Benita *~*~*~*~ The truth of the matter is that you always know the right thing to do. The hard part is doing it. -Gen. Schwarzkoff [This message has been edited by BtwnRockandHardPlace (edited 10-26-2001).] |
||
© Copyright 2001 Benita Amedeo - All Rights Reserved | |||
RosePetal![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Oh yes, I know this feeling very well! I enjoyed this! xoxo |
||
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
In perfect unending love..... beautiful.........*s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
||
Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Unending? Not even for a sip of wine? No time outs? WOW! I love it! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
||
Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very sensual..nice. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
||
Rodney Belcher Member
since 2000-06-06
Posts 227Taylor, Michigan |
ahhh to be young and in love again...heck I'd take either at this juncture in my life... ![]() Lets Love one another-let God do the worrying, Rodney [This message has been edited by Rodney Belcher (edited 10-26-2001).] |
||
Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Done so well.....the expressions were awesome. I am envious of you. You put together a package that speaks love so loudly. |
||
Chelsea~ Member
since 2001-02-09
Posts 260Ontario, CANADA |
Now, this is really lovely - presentation and words ![]() I really enjoyed ~~~ BTW, is that Claire De Lune? |
||
BtwnRockandHardPlace Member
since 2001-10-23
Posts 98NJ, USA |
"BTW, is that Claire De Lune?" YES - it is!! ![]() *~*~*~*~ |
||
![]() ![]() |
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
![]() ![]() ![]() |
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |