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Rosebud1229
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0 posted 2001-10-26 01:09 AM


Love, definition so infinite to be described,
Boundaries so wide never truly defined,
Emotions so vast, hard to grasp the true meaning,
Yet love is what we all desire.
Love makes you melt, shiver, and quiver,
All at the same time,
Makes you anticipate way to early,
But somehow fate steps in and has a grin,
With a dozen red roses.
Love makes you tingle, Light headed just from
Those eyes, that say I love you.
Love is what brings life tomorrow.
Yet love is a mystery never solved, just conquered.
Very much worth the wait.

© Copyright 2001 Rose - All Rights Reserved
RosePetal
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1 posted 2001-10-26 01:32 AM


ask 10 people to define Love and you will get 10 different answers! People always tell me when I find true love I'll just feel it.
Still waiting...: )
Nice Poem!

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2001-10-26 05:06 AM


Enjoyed your thoughts on love...James
Rosebud1229
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3 posted 2001-10-26 10:58 AM


RosePetals your so right, that is the best way by feeling for love is by far the hardest word to narrow down, we could but then I'm sure it would be a million words.
JamesMichael, thank you there's just something about love, you just got to have it.

Amused Cupid
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since 2001-10-24
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4 posted 2001-10-27 12:14 PM


Beautiful poem you have written here. Love is always worth the wait, there is someone out there for everyone, and everyone deserves a chance to experience true love.  

Rosebud1229
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5 posted 2001-10-27 12:37 PM


YOur so right Amused Cupid, Love is always worth the wait, it's just knowing when the wait is over, and when you find true love.
Kevin Taylor
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since 1999-12-23
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near Vancouver, BC, Canada
6 posted 2001-10-28 09:22 PM


Oh, That many splendored thing! And one of my fave topics. Thank you!

Kevin

"Poetry is, at once, what you get... and how you get there."


Kevin Taylor
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near Vancouver, BC, Canada
7 posted 2001-10-28 09:24 PM


I forgot to say that the line I liked best on mahy levels is "Love is what brings life tomorrow."

Mmmm mmm!

Kevin

"Poetry is, at once, what you get... and how you get there."


Startime
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since 2000-10-03
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Canada
8 posted 2001-10-29 08:59 AM


Love just seems to call out to each of us. Without it we seem incomplete. A wonderful poem that I loved reading. My favourite topic, of course.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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