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Sven
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0 posted 2001-10-25 10:03 PM


I am everywhere
I am a light in the dark
You are not alone

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simple I know. . . but, it's what came out. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

© Copyright 2001 John Garcia - All Rights Reserved
wayoutwalt
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1 posted 2001-10-25 10:04 PM


God o yuh
Honeybee
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2 posted 2001-10-25 10:05 PM



No, senryu is simple, m'friend, this is beautiful, it reminds me of God, your soul or a friend speaking...  

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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3 posted 2001-10-25 10:13 PM


Sven,

this reminds me of that song, hymn
"I'll be your candle in the window"
very comforting, very peaceful....thanks





Lauren~


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I keep my ideals,
because in spite of everything,
I still believe that
people are really good at heart.
Anne Frank
09*12*01

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 10-25-2001).]

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4 posted 2001-10-25 10:22 PM


A very powerful and short statement.  You
are the light.

Enchantress
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5 posted 2001-10-25 10:31 PM


Sven.  We are never ever alone and the pure thought of it makes me feel as though my heart may burst with joy at times.  Thank you for this my friend.  ~Nancy~

  ~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Sven
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6 posted 2001-10-26 06:14 PM


thank you all my friends. . . just a simple reminder to all of you. . . and to anyone who feels that they are alone in this world. . .

thank you again. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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7 posted 2001-10-26 06:39 PM


ahh..yes, but who is the author of this one, Beautiful Heart! lots and lots of you in here, but much of something else inward..and some things inward aren't necessarily ours...if you know what I"m getting at.
   enjoyed!

Sometimes the heart needs the solace of solitude and silence.

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8 posted 2001-10-26 07:00 PM


Very conforting thoughts, thanks.
Sandra

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9 posted 2001-10-26 08:54 PM


*sigh* no matter how dark it gets, Sven, you are always there with a light to guide us all to safety. ***big hugs*** You are a very special man to us all, you know.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Isis
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10 posted 2001-10-28 06:17 PM


Beautiful sentiment Sven, so simple yet so meaningful.....

Isis

*The greatest warrior is one that does not need to fight* ~Isis~



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11 posted 2001-10-28 06:39 PM


Lovely words.
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12 posted 2001-10-28 07:17 PM


Sven,

As I was sitting here reading, I was feeling very alone. Thank you for reminding me I am not.

                                 Dawn

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13 posted 2001-10-28 07:38 PM


Sven,
  
   Simple but so touching. So much is said with few words.  I love it It's just what I needed to read right now.  Thank you.

Hugs,
Tara

Don't marry for money...  You can borrow it cheaper!

Sven
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14 posted 2001-10-28 07:59 PM


everyone. . .thank you for reading. . .

and, you're welcome. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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