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False Echo
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False Echo |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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I heard the echo of his love so strong, it resonated real But it was simply that which was no longer there for me to feel. A moments treasure, back in time into his arms and heart again Apparently love is my crime he claims to now be only friends. My heart is stranded in his wake my dreams have faded into smoke. I gave my all, and he did take and now it all seems a cruel joke. Can heart so broken twice be healed? perhaps I should just leave it lay in pieces round his heart of steel and hope he feels my pain someday. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
in pieces round his heart of steel and hope he feels my pain someday. He will dear and only then will he understand. This was sadly beautiful. Maree  |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
A moments treasure, back in time into his arms and heart again Apparently love is my crime he claims to now be only friends. Friends shouldn't break your heart. Hope all is better for you soon, Sandra. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
It doesn't matter what he feels ... only what you feel and why. Good work with flowing presentation Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sandra, I sense a great deal of pain. Of a love lost, not what they said they were. No one should ever love another falsely. The pain of the loss is very great. I hope you can recover from this. I wish you well. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CatalinaMoon~ Very emotive with such raw aching emotion~ I'm pretty sure you don't really wish anyone to feel the pain you're experiencing right now~  Healing begins when you're ready ... you'll get there~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Catalinamoon, I totally understand where you are coming from in these words. I too am healing from being burned the same way. I hope you find a way to let your heart heal. I know it is difficult, but we have to believe it is possible and we will no longer have to hear the "false echo's" of their words. Dawn |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sad sigh) Oh Sandra, this is so so sad, and I know of the sadness you're going through! (big hugggsssssss) The healing all begins when finally we take the time to think it over, and I promise this time will pass and your heart will again be embraced by the most beautiful, heavenly love that will have your heart beating with joy! (sigh) I just know it will, for your heart always glows with love and sweetness! (big hugggssssss) My heart is always with you, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
What goes around comes around. I too hope he feels someday what he lost in you. My heart goes out to you, dear one, for you only wished to give your all when to him it seemed just a game of the heart. *sigh* Does one ever find a man who is honest and sincere who wants as much love as we have to give? I do not know the answer to my question for I think that kind of man is rare indeed. ***hugs*** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Thank you everyone, I am still hurt, but I will be ok. And good firends like you make that possible. Sandra |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
catalinamoon, Oh, our hearts have a wonderful way of repairing themselves time and time again. This is lovely. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I've learned that the heart is stronger than we think . . . and that there's nothing like love that can heal it. . . the words are still coming. . . and that's good. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sandra, You are writing about it and that's good. Just the fact that you are writing is good....but, to let the hurt out this way is even better. !hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sandra....I opened my email addy up in my profile, if u want it. |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Many have stood where you now see many have come, much like me. The heart is a muscle still, exercised by love and will and grows from every plea. I believe you have all ready grown from all your pain, cast it now to the waters of life and cherish the knowledge it has given you for finding what you really deserve ... true love. Hold true Sandra. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
All I know is that everytime my heart is broken eventually someone new comes along that amazes me...and yet there is a sadness because the past one didn't work out as expected...James |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is a very touching poem. I don't understand why men want to play with our heart. I hope you will get over this, soon. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Thanks so much everyone, for the compassion. I sure need it lately. Sandra |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Great poem, fortunally time heats magically. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
My dear Sandra... I've been "out of the loop" for a little bit, and this was a very melancholy portrait to find hanging on PIP's wall... I know of the emotions to which you refer all too well... intimately well. I send you a strong heart-hug and an empathetic smile, for indeed, "this too shall pass," though it will probably take its sweet time. My advice, if you care for it, is to learn from all that's transpired, savour the positive moments, and forgive the not so positive ones, knowing that you went into it with the best of intentions and with a pure heart -- Love can never be wrong when it's honest. Peace to you, my friend. -MVS "Learn to let go of fear, doubt, and disbelief..." --THE MATRIX |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Tis the stronger heart which yields to Love and the steely one which is left in the cold to move it's callous blood at a sad pace. This will pass and you'll be the better. "Happy people have no history" - French Proverb |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
Tenderly wrap all these emotions up in pretty tissue paper and place them in a shoe box. Then put it in the bottom of your closet...throw a bunch of shoes and junk on top of it...and close the door! He does NOT deserve you nor anything else from you now. And I say this with a lving heart dear friend...and you know it, too. I wish you well, please be well. And I love this piece of work...lovely indeed |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I just have to say, to all of you here who have taken time to give comforting and thoughtful words, I love you. Honestly I do. It's odd how ones own family and close friends can give less in these kinds of times, and friends of the forum give more. Interesting observation.. Anyway thank you all so much. Sandra |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Sanda, I truly felt your words, and as for the comfort felt here, it is a simple fact that we are able to clearly and without any obligations, or expectations express how we "really" feel, so I would say you are really loved. The healing place is there for you and you will find it. Hugs. ~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~ |
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