Eyes Across The Dancefloor

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Open Poetry #16

Eyes Across The Dancefloor

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2001-10-25 06:12 PM

From across the room I saw you
As you stood out amongst the crowd
The place was really buzzing
As the music played so loud

From over my glass I watched you
So handsome did you seem
Then I saw you walk towards me
Surely this had to be a dream?

But my eyes did not deceive me
As you smiled and said 'Hello'
It was at that moment I realised
Much more of you I'd like to know

You lead me to the dance floor
As you enveloped me in your arms
Soon I felt myself surrendering
To your smile and all its charms

As we danced so close together
I felt like I was walking on air
We had eyes only for one another
And it seemed just you and I were there

Our souls became one that evening
As two hearts were beating in time
And as I lay my head on your shoulder
I knew from that moment you'd be mine

Suetang

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2001-10-25 06:26 PM

Oh, what a lucky lady you are! And that was a magical moment when he asked you for that dance of a lifetime. (Hope it's true!)

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2001-10-25 06:38 PM

such a beautiful setting to fall in love.
In the arms of someone that you feel so
right about. Beautiful poem Sue.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2001-10-25 06:39 PM

Sounds like a romantic slow dance...do you remember the tune? James

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