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Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

0 posted 2001-10-25 02:05 PM

YOU
AMK
October 24, 2001

Laying here in the darkness of night
Your silouette is the background of the shimmering moon
Your hair cascades around your shoulders
As I look into your eyes of sweet softness
Your skin as soft to the touch as silk or satin

Your voice calls my name
It's like angels singing in chorus
Some heavenly melody
As the light from God shines down on us

Celestrial skies greet my eyes
But they can't begin to compare
To the beauty that I see in your face
You simply glow, like the golden Sun

You are the very essence of perfection
The Carolina breeze remembers you well though you've not been here
As De ja vu begins to play inside my mind...fantasy or memory?
Your smile holds the center of my heart and love

Shadows play against the wall
As candlelight flickers near by
I look into your face of pure beauty
A sigh that would make Angels cry tears of joy, is heard

I love you...

"I could kiss you in
the rain forever.
Turn all of your pain to pleasure
Fill up your days with
sunlight, make the
passion last every night"

[This message has been edited by Aimster (edited 10-25-2001).]

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

1 posted 2001-10-25 02:06 PM

Sounds like love to me

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2001-10-25 02:13 PM

Very, very nice. A gentle love song from a gentle soul.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2001-10-25 03:09 PM

(sigh) Oh my gosh, this is sooooooo romantic, sweet Amy! (sigh) The sweet whispers of Carolina breezes, the flickering candlelight, the angelic tears! (sigh) Oooooohhhh, this will melt your loves heart forever! (sigh) I LOVE IT!!! BRAVO!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amy, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2001-10-25 05:08 PM

What would we have to write about if the
word Love did not exist... YOU wrote a
very loving poem. thank you for YOU.

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

5 posted 2001-10-25 07:27 PM

A beautiful, loving and tender poem of love you have penned so wonderfully Sweet Amy.

Maree

Kendaall
Junior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 15

6 posted 2001-10-26 01:55 PM

Aims, Sweet romance has always fit you well. A lovely poem of heart felt emotions. Your lady is truely fortunate to be your one and only. Have a beautiful love affair my sweet Amy. Annette

Rodney Belcher
Member

since 2000-06-06

Posts 227
Taylor, Michigan

7 posted 2001-10-26 02:53 PM

no matter how well you describe it ( and you did well here) nothing can make you feel true love but love itself...thanks for baring you heart Aimster

Lets Love one another-let God do the worrying,
Rodney

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