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With a Tiny Key
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With a Tiny Key |
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BtwnRockandHardPlace Member
since 2001-10-23
Posts 98NJ, USA 
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you have stolen my heart! you opened the box with a tiny key and took my heart out gently you held it in your hands you could see it was broken and frail you were so careful not to hurt it further you kissed it gingerly delicately like a precious flower your love and tenderness are helping my heart heal when once again it becomes whole it will be yours and so will I mind, body, and soul |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Benita, this is sooooooo beautifully romantic! (sigh) Love is the key to all our hearts and our minds, our bodies, our spirits. (smiles) Your heart sings like a music box flowing with sweet love! (big hugggssssss) I love it, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Benita, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton[/center] [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (edited 10-25-2001).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh, no....'twas not your heart stolen, but found, and cared for...because you knew enough to allow that person to have possession of the key... this likes me...thank you! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
A sweet,tender poem. I like this. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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BtwnRockandHardPlace Member
since 2001-10-23
Posts 98NJ, USA |
Sunshine, HE found the key all by himself. I myself didn't even know what the key was or where to find it. Once he found the key, he used it to opened the box that held my heart and stole it.  *~*~*~*~ |
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