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A Whisper's Caress
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on the horizon of a fairytale

0 posted 2001-10-25 01:25 PM



Her Flameā€¦


A moment of everlasting
dwells in a single kiss

the flicker of her flame
fanned by the breathless
whisper of his sighs

and love encircled sees no finish


achildsheart
10-25-01


Look into the eyes of a man and
you will find the soul of the woman
who loves him...

[This message has been edited by A Whisper's Caress (edited 10-25-2001).]

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Duncan
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1 posted 2001-10-25 01:50 PM


What a kiss, what a flame!  Pure poetry.
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Member Rara Avis
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Deep in the heart
2 posted 2001-10-25 02:24 PM


a kiss forever
and the whisper of her thighs
increased libido

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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3 posted 2001-10-25 03:19 PM




(smiles) Soooooooo beautiful! (sigh) Her love shines in your warm romantic words! (sigh) May her love rest in your soul forever! (sigh) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2001-10-25 05:04 PM


You write love so well is so few words.  
I enjoyed this..

A Whisper's Caress
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on the horizon of a fairytale
5 posted 2001-10-25 07:20 PM


gentleman,
thank you all so much.

Look into the eyes of a man and
you will find the soul of the woman
who loves him...

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