Open Poetry #16 |
One Fateful Night |
ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
Ok guys, I got it bad! I'm in love! I know it is way to soon to be saying this seeing as I have only known her for a short time but she is just the most wonderful human being on the face of God's green earth. ok i'll stop raving on and on about her....and here is the poem....... One fateful night, I saw you, I went into this thinking of nothing new Meeting you on the spur of the moment, looking into your eyes and feeling an amazing connection, sweetie you are just full blown perfection I love the way you laugh, talk, the way we just seem to fit I thought that I had met my soul mate before but when I touched you all thoughts of her went out the door You consume every moment of my time, see you are even making me rhyme I want to be with you today, forever and always, and all the seconds in between You don't know how much you mean to me, maybe i'm being stupid and not thinking straight but my heart belongs solely to you Forever to you, I will be true |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I can feel the enthusiasm and new love in all of your words. Nicely said...I hope that all is ever true for you. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssssss) OH MY GOSH, THIS IS SOOOOO EXCITING, I'M SO HAPPY FOR YOU!!! (smiles) It makes me so happy to hear this, your beautiful golden heart always shines with love and it makes me so proud to see you've found true love! (smiles) This expression is beautiful, and this is bound to melt her heart forever! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Laura, and this is the day I have longed for. I am sooo happy you've found someone you love!! this is the best news! congratulations. please take care. my warmet regards, Amy "I could kiss you in |
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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
Magnus, Thanks for reading, I hope that it works out too. :-) Noah, You are always so happy! Thanks for reading. Amy, Yes that day has come, thank you for your warm wishes. I greatly appreciate it. It is my sincere hope that we always remain friends. As Always, ~Laura~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
BRAVO!! I so love to read about falling in love. Your words made me giggle with delight inside. I so hope this words out for you. You are floating on cloud nine. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
Star, Yes, I am on cloud nine.....Thanks for reading. ~Laura~ |
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