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ParisGrl
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0 posted 2001-10-24 06:44 PM


Ok guys,   I got it bad!  I'm in love!  I know it is way to soon to be saying this seeing as I have only known her for a short time but she is just the most wonderful human being on the face of God's green earth.  ok i'll stop raving on and on about her....and here is the poem.......

One fateful night, I saw you, I went into this thinking of nothing new
Meeting you on the spur of the moment, looking into your eyes and feeling an amazing connection, sweetie you are just full blown perfection
I love the way you laugh, talk, the way we just seem to fit
I thought that I had met my soul mate before but when I touched you all thoughts of her went out the door
You consume every moment of my time, see you are even making me rhyme
I want to be with you today, forever and always, and all the seconds in between
You don't know how much you mean to me, maybe i'm being stupid and not thinking straight but my heart belongs solely to you
Forever to you, I will be true

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Magnus
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1 posted 2001-10-24 07:23 PM


I can feel the enthusiasm and new love in
all of your words.  Nicely said...I hope
that all is ever true for you.

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2001-10-24 07:32 PM




(big hugggssssssss) OH MY GOSH, THIS IS SOOOOO EXCITING, I'M SO HAPPY FOR YOU!!! (smiles) It makes me so happy to hear this, your beautiful golden heart always shines with love and it makes me so proud to see you've found true love! (smiles) This expression is beautiful, and this is bound to melt her heart forever! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Aimster
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3 posted 2001-10-24 07:53 PM


Laura,

and this is the day I have longed for. I am sooo happy you've found someone you love!! this is the best news! congratulations.

please take care.

my warmet regards,
Amy

"I could kiss you in
the rain forever.
Turn all of your pain to pleasure
Fill up your days with
sunlight, make the
passion last every night"

ParisGrl
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4 posted 2001-10-24 08:56 PM


Magnus,

Thanks for reading, I hope that it works out too.  :-)

Noah,

You are always so happy!  Thanks for reading.

Amy,

Yes that day has come, thank you for your warm wishes.  I greatly appreciate it.  It is my sincere hope that we always remain friends.

As Always,
~Laura~

Startime
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5 posted 2001-10-24 10:26 PM


BRAVO!! I so love to read about falling in love. Your words made me giggle with delight inside. I so hope this words out for you. You are floating on cloud nine.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

ParisGrl
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6 posted 2001-10-25 05:25 PM


Star,

Yes, I am on cloud nine.....Thanks for reading.

~Laura~

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