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Open Poetry #16

The Curse of Man

Fandaen
Junior Member

since 2001-06-24

Posts 47
Ft Worth, Texas

0 posted 2001-10-24 06:11 PM

As I sit and wonder why
things happen as they do

The only thought that flows through my head
is to blame it all on you

All the hurt and all the pain
oh it woes me so

How I live each minute, Each hour, Each day
I really do not know

You hold men’s lives in the
palm of your hand

Their hearts their minds their flesh their blood
all of which makes them a man

I sacrificed all for you
now I have nothing left

You took the house, the kids, the car
oh ya even my paycheck

So now I shall take the vow
of celibacy

At least until the next time I see
the next woman I can not do with out

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

1 posted 2001-10-24 07:57 PM

heheh that's us men yuh

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

2 posted 2001-10-24 09:05 PM

Shoot...I am not sure if I should *sigh* because you have had it hard or *giggle* because of the way you ended it. You have me bouncing like a yoyo.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2001-10-24 09:06 PM

LOL Next time you won't have to worry about the lady taking it all, cuz it's all gone already! Good poem. Poor guy.

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

4 posted 2001-10-24 09:50 PM

This is cute. Serious write til it got to the end. Gotta have a sense of humour about these things, as Monty python say "always look on the bright side of life"

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Fandaen
Junior Member

since 2001-06-24

Posts 47
Ft Worth, Texas

5 posted 2001-10-24 09:56 PM

Ahh yes Monty Python Gotta love them
I know I do

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

6 posted 2001-10-25 12:10 PM

Sure enough was true of many, and enjoyed your humourous ending.

~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~

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