Open Poetry #16 |
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Wondering |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines ![]() |
Wondering Some days the emptiness overflows, the heart loses it's rhythm, beating a different tune. Words never said, repeat themselves over and over until forced to open eyes, and see that there is no one there. No one to share them with. No one to say them back. Funny how words mean so much, can change the dark to light, can uplift a spirit when spiraling downward, can bring a smile to one's face and a twinkle to one's eyes. Funny too, how when missing, you want the world to go away. You want to cocoon yourself, pretend you don't exist and for a time it works, but not long enough. I wait for those words I don't often hear, wondering why that is. And try to put the idea out of my head, that maybe they no longer exist for me. "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Wynter, Nonsense, you are a beautiful soul And I'm sure some day will reach your goal. *L* PS. enjoyed the read. |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
they do exist for you! Of course they do!! and when it's right, you'll hear them ![]() ![]() |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* my heart goes out to you in understanding and though I know it is not the same, you hear the words all the time from those here who share all your joys and sorrows with you. We love you dearly. ![]() Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
they exist Maureen, all good things come to those who wait. (I get kinda tired of waiting though at times!) Nice express. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Abigaile Member
since 2001-10-21
Posts 112San Mateo, CA |
That's right, good things DO come to those who wait. Patience and understanding will always lead to happiness. *BIG HUG* I really loved this poem "I am nae poet, in a sense; |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it ![]() |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
listen carefully love is speaking on the wind you will hear it soon Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Sy...nice rhyme, but not this time. thank you, though for responding with your p.s. SEA...I doubt it...after a while you wouldn't recognize the words if they were spoken. hugss back Startime...yes I appreciate the caring in passions, though some days it just doesn't seem to be enough, guess I am a bit selfish today. Donna, Thank you.. I guess I am just not the patient kind. Abigaile...thanks for enjoying my words vandana, always a thanks and a ((hug)) Interloper ..you always write the nicest responses...should put them all together and post them. hugssss I,you do lift my spirits some. ~Wynter |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Maureen- All I can say is 'ouch'...been there. Big hugs to you, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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DawnG![]() ![]()
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Maureen, They all say that good things happen to those who wait. I agree I'm tired of waiting too. Dawn |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big hugggsssssss) Words can do so much indeed, and your beautiful words always touch our hearts! (smiles) It's always a pleasure to read your love and thoughts, and we all love you so much always! (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Wynter, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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