Open Poetry #16 |
Early Morning Coffee |
catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
(actually this is more like middle of the night coffee-I have forgotten how to sleep) He's a bit like cappuccino So warm and soothing to the soul or sometimes with taste of bitter scalding coffee, still mornings' whole. He can be an expresso too somewhat harsh and extremely strong but very satisfying yet despite the flavor slightly wrong. Cafe au lait without sugar can still be something that you need but with the extra sweetness there it serves for so much more than feed. I believe this is heaven to no one else but me, and I will defend it as long as I'm left here to linger in silence...Sara McLachlan |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Morning Sandra. Great metaphor here, with such meaning behind. Loving this as I drink my black coffee with no sugar (hey, I'm already sweet enough!! ) If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Ha ha, me too Tracy..mines black and I am definitely sweet enough. Now as for a certain other person...hm... S |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Mmmmmm...my favorite kind of coffee drink is a brownie Frappucino! (smiles) A lot of extra sweetness is in there! (smiles) Such a beautiful poem, sweet Sandra, you always write such fantastic imagery! I LOVE IT!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
What a wonderful wakeup this is. A great way to start the day. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
mmmmm......coffee!?....cappuccino? What a treat.....!! I loved your poem with or without sugar... Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cat, Strong coffee sweet poem. *L* |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is a wonderful thing to wake up to. I just love it. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoys |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
Boy, I loved the flow of this, sipped right along with it this morning, thank you Sandra!!! -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
because he is he he will be just what you want and when you want it Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
heheh nice metaphor o yuh |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Forgotten how to sleep, maybe want to try decaf. Then again, coffee without caffeine...what's the point. Really liked this. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Now for a nice cozy little cafe to go along with the coffee....Enjoyed this...thanx. |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Sandra~ Great metaphors and imagery...you put the flavours on my tongue! Thank you for the lovely wake-up. Hugs, ~Krista Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
A really good wakeup poem. Cappuchino, cafe au lait...whatever you wanted? |
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cottage Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 138 |
makes me crave for one big hot cuppa now! truly enjoyed cottage |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I'm no fun at all cause when I go to Starbucks I ask for the regular kind of coffee...no expresso for me...James |
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