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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

0 posted 2001-10-24 12:29 PM

Do you feel the restlessness--
the gnawing hunger 'neath my feet?
Place your hand upon my breast
feel the rhythm of my beat.

Tonight my thirst swells on my tongue--
and still my time has not begun.

Have you ever frightened self
with your intensity?
Have you ever feared to start
for fear you could not cease?

Tonight I'll dance and laugh and sing--
tomorrow will forever be...

I am wearing finest silk
in tease of breast in silhouette
constantly I lick my lips
anticipating what is next...

Tonight I'll see you in my dreams--
How sad, I have to dream to BE...

A moment was a gift of grace--
grateful just to see your face.
But now I've had the all of you,
and nothing now, but you, will do.

Tonight, alone, I'll seach the skies...
whispered longing in my thighs...
I'll kneel in prayer for just one sign--
that just this once, love be called "mine."

Meet me at the colonade--
whisper to me, serenade...
tips of fingers, dance divine
promises of you arch spine
melting of your lips to mine
urgency of serpentine.

Tonight, tomorrow, yesterday--
I want it all to be today.
I want each note played out in song--
meet me in the park at dawn.

CocoBaci
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since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

1 posted 2001-10-24 12:47 PM

Tonight, alone, I'll seach the skies...
whispered longing in my thighs...
I'll kneel in prayer for just one sign--
that just this once, love be called "mine.
"whisper to me, serenade...
tips of fingers, dance divine
promises of you arch spine
melting of your lips to mine
urgency of serpentine.

A fantasticccccccccccccc write sweetSerenity...
In2my library 4 this gem I say
Hugs2uPoetFriend
*~coco~*

Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

2 posted 2001-10-24 01:13 AM

I hope he's there.

I loved this and miss you, Karen. *hugs*

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

3 posted 2001-10-24 01:25 AM

serenity,
Who would refuse such and invitation? Makes me want to volunteer! Great job. Wish I could do that.

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

4 posted 2001-10-24 01:44 AM

Wow! If he isn't there I say this man needs some serious help! Fantastic invitation to bliss.

~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2001-10-24 04:15 AM

This is good...James

wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

6 posted 2001-10-24 08:21 AM

i circle yes on this note and pass it back to you in class....Write Back

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2001-10-24 08:28 AM

(smiles) Mmmmmmm...such a sensual and gorgeous invitation indeed! (smiles) Your beautiful words are so soft and passionate, sweet Karen, this will melt any man's heart that receives your invitation! (smiles) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

8 posted 2001-10-24 08:58 AM

Have you ever frightened self
with your intensity?
Have you ever feared to start
for fear you could not cease?
===========================
But now I've had the all of you,
and nothing now, but you, will do.

Tonight, alone, I'll seach the skies...
whispered longing in my thighs...
I'll kneel in prayer for just one sign--
that just this once, love be called "mine."

Meet me at the colonade--
whisper to me, serenade...
tips of fingers, dance divine
promises of you arch spine
melting of your lips to mine
urgency of serpentine.
====================================

oh damn...........
do I need to say a word????
no..cuz you already just KNOW I KNOW!!!
You Rock when you Rhyme me twin...
and this is RHYME DIVINE

This distance has shown how the road remains alone
Now I'm looking in my life ... for a truth that is my own.

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

9 posted 2001-10-24 09:04 AM

WOW!!!An invitation that he couldn't possibly refuse. Magnificent.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

10 posted 2001-10-24 10:10 AM

*sigh

Who does it better? Not too many, my dear. This is a rhyme sublime....

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

11 posted 2001-10-24 11:00 AM

This is very good. I enjoyed reading it.

The Lady of Shallot
Senior Member

since 2001-10-03

Posts 818
USA

12 posted 2001-10-24 11:03 AM

this is utterly beautiful...

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

13 posted 2001-10-24 04:46 PM

just a wee bit of expression of lust!

Thanks all for reading, and my time is limited again...my apologies for the "post and run" thing I have been guilty of lately...sigh...I wanted a "life"--do be careful what you wish for! Or at least, be VERY specific!

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