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SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

0 posted 2001-09-22 10:36 PM

The song played softly
And took me by surprise
I was struck with the vision
Of your enchanting eyes

I was taken to the moment
I first heard this sweet refrain
And was lost to the memory
Of us dancing in the rain

Soaking wet
But too in love to care
If there was anyone else in the world
I simply was not aware

Every word was perfect
With a magical melody
I swear I could feel
You melting into me

And just like that the song was over
I was brought back to my reality
With a wistful remember
Of my missed destiny

~SEA~

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

1 posted 2001-09-22 10:39 PM

sounds like a wonderful memory. great read..last time I walked in the rain it was to hide my tears
alan

[This message has been edited by Alan (edited 09-22-2001).]

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2001-09-22 10:57 PM

SEA, This is just sooo beautiful. One of my favourite things to do... dancing in the rain.

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

3 posted 2001-09-23 12:35 PM

This sounded so nice til I got to the last part. Then it sounded like my life

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

4 posted 2001-11-09 07:27 PM

ouch..that ending just aches....

so..i was skippin around in the back pages...and i found this

great write SEA!

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"am i in too deep--
have i lost my mind?
i dont care--
youre near, tonite..."
-enrique

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

5 posted 2001-11-09 08:00 PM

Susan,

you wrote my heart with this one
sweet friend. You always write with
such amazing honestly and emotion...

this was beautiful even though the end
was achingly sad. take care sweet poetress
and may you find your true "destiny".
that is my wish for you!

take care.
amy

"I could kiss you in
the rain forever.
Turn all of your pain to pleasure
Fill up your days with
sunlight, make the
passion last every night"

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2001-11-09 08:05 PM

Sue...if only we all could have joy like
that and be able to keep it...never letting
go of it. Very Nice...

rosepetals25

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since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

7 posted 2001-11-09 08:44 PM

Susan,

You write so beautifully. I know I have said that a million times... but it is SO true. Very much enjoyed

Hugs,
Tara

Dee
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since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

8 posted 2001-11-09 08:47 PM

Susan, this is gorgeous. So sad but sweet. I love the way you write these.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

9 posted 2001-11-09 08:56 PM

Beautifully done, SEA!

Larry C

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since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

10 posted 2001-11-10 12:29 PM

SEA,
I know some songs like that about moments very much like that and feelings you express like that. It's a good thing you write like this because I can't get those things on paper without your work. Thanks. lc

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