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Evenings Shade |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
The heavens call to waiting ear the shining stars would bring a tear For peaceful sight is in the night to soothe the soul til early light Winds of calm caress the heart tis no need to be far apart The toil and strain throughout the day falls away in early nights sway Sounds around will bring the calm as peaceful as a church choirs evening psalm The sound of crickets play their tune knowing the night birds will be there soon Staring out into blackening skies waiting to see the early moon rise With the rise, I will see your face shadowed with moonbeams, just a trace For your presence will wrap around silent as cats paws without sound Is it your hand or just the breeze whiff that touches my cheek in silent rife To close the eyes is to hear you sigh or is it only the trees I hear you by Whatever is may, will be here now in the darkness of night when love does allow [This message has been edited by Logan (edited 10-23-2001).] |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
*sigh* Logan...always SO BEAUTIFUL! I love the ending  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Soooooo beautiful! Love is always magical in the nighttime when silence is golden and the stars and moonlight shine bright! (sigh) Sooooo lovely, sweet Logan, I love it! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Logan thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
For your presence will wrap around silent as cats paws without sound Is it your hand or just the breeze whiff that touches my cheek in silent rife To close the eyes is to hear you sigh or is it only the trees I hear you by Whatever is may, will be here now in the darkness of night when love does allow ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Oh Logan...this sings to me. It just reaches out and touches me...making me want to dance in the night wind. How beautifully your pen writes of the night. Thank you for this one. ~warm autumnal hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Logan dear...so softly romantic, the breath of evening is in your words and the sigh of a love song. Beautiful! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The heavens call to waiting ear the shining stars would bring a tear For peaceful sight is in the night to soothe the soul til early light Winds of calm caress the heart tis no need to be far apart =============================== Is it your hand or just the breeze whiff that touches my cheek in silent rife To close the eyes is to hear you sigh or is it only the trees I hear you by Whatever is may, will be here now in the darkness of night when love does allow ================================= Ahhh you romantic rhyming fool you LOL  this is WONDERFUL Logan...so you!!! This distance has shown how the road remains alone |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, SEA, I get humbled when one as good as you says such nice things, Maybe I am learning from reading your wonderful works..very gentle smile Noah, very gentle smile, you will make me blush..thank you so much for your gentle thoughts.. Ahh, Nancy, then free the soul and dance in the breeze. Thank you for your words, I always enjoy seeing you..very gentle smile Martie, very gentle smile, the way your words flow, always give me the desire to try to come even halfway close to how well you pen.. Shucks, JM,... 'digging toe in ground, but looking up with mischievious look'..last time it was, so me, was after cleaning the barns out, just a ol country boy, ma am...very gentle smile |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is very beautiful, Logan. As always, your writing touches me. Sandra |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Your words read like a caress... lovely! ~Tier |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
The evening gently beckoned you to my side to greet anew the nightly sweat of lover's dew. There you stood beneath love's tree with your tenderness, we were three silence settling in silent glee. Umm..so I'm a little rough on my rhyme, but it was inspired at least. Sweet One, you always did have a way of making me sigh. This is beautiful.  Sometimes the heart needs the solace of solitude and silence. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
OK then..... So youre a WONDERFUL ROMANTIC COUNTRY BOY oh yes....and a dang fine poet   |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
What very pretty images you have here. This is indeed beautiful. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Logan--don't mind me...just back for another read of this beauty. |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
A coffee break, a reading break, a treat for the eyes and soul... |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Logan- Just lovely, my friend...romantic even. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Logan~ 'For peaceful sight is in the night to soothe the soul til early light Winds of calm caress the heart tis no need to be far apart' *sigh* by the fireside~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* a dreamy poem that sets the heart to beating quickly. I love it. So very romantic. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
My what lovely images you painted in my mind, very beautiful Logan. ~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~ |
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