Open Poetry #16 |
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Wishing You Were Here |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia ![]() |
As I walk along the seashore Barefoot am I on the sand I close my eyes and imagine You walk with me hand in hand We stop and gaze over the water As you remove a strand of hair from my face Then I move my body closer to you As our fingers interlace A passionate kiss by the water Our senses now coming alive How much I like what I see As I look deeply into your eyes The seabirds fly above me As the wind assists them in flight And I can't help but wonder Will I be alone again tonight? But for now I must be happy As I know that's how you'd want me to be And I take great comfort in my memories And of the precious times you spent with me Suetang |
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RosePetal![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Awww now this is just gorgeous...It made me think of someone who was special to me. |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
A day by the ocean....love has grown so much around this setting....This poem expresses very deeply the love you have. I enjoyed this. thank you. |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Keep strolling along that beach of precious memories. Well done, Suetang. ![]() |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
You are always the beautiful sea mist in all your oceanside verse! Lovely Sue! Miss you lots. Sincerely Regina |
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