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Suetang
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Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2001-10-23 06:46 PM


As I walk along the seashore
Barefoot am I on the sand
I close my eyes and imagine
You walk with me hand in hand

We stop and gaze over the water
As you remove a strand of hair from my face
Then I move my body closer to you
As our fingers interlace

A passionate kiss by the water
Our senses now coming alive
How much I like what I see
As I look deeply into your eyes

The seabirds fly above me
As the wind assists them in flight
And I can't help but wonder
Will I be alone again tonight?

But for now I must be happy
As I know that's how you'd want me to be
And I take great comfort in my memories
And of the precious times you spent with me

Suetang

© Copyright 2001 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
RosePetal
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1 posted 2001-10-23 06:50 PM


Awww now this is just gorgeous...It made me think of someone who was special to me.

Magnus
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2 posted 2001-10-23 07:00 PM


A day by the ocean....love has grown so much
around this setting....This poem expresses
very deeply the love you have.  I enjoyed
this.  thank you.

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Gaia
3 posted 2001-10-23 07:00 PM


Keep strolling along that beach of precious memories. Well done, Suetang.  
rwood
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4 posted 2001-10-25 06:34 AM


You are always the beautiful sea mist in all your oceanside verse! Lovely Sue! Miss you lots.

Sincerely
Regina

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