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Dr.Moose1
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since 1999-09-05

Posts 3448
Bewilderment , USA

0 posted 2001-10-23 06:08 PM

She summons me to pay fair tribute due
of those who would admire her design .
Her sleek form calls the hand to lend a touch
of reverence to each and ev'ry line .

In shaded nuance I behold her charms ,
such promise as could render one complete .
Once proud this humbled warrior dis-armed ,
no more to battle stumbles at her feet .

Yet , she whose golden skin belies a heart
as black as night will oft' avert her gaze ,
and make one wonder what might be the point
of trying to appease this one who stays

forever so aloof , pray tell me true ,
might I yet be your one , Dear No. 2 ?

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

1 posted 2001-10-23 07:29 PM

WOW!!!A question that deserves an answer. I hope you get the one you are looking for. This poem is powerful and I absolutely love the way you put it together. BRAVO!!!!

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

2 posted 2001-10-23 10:00 PM

Wow, great write Doc. Moving, very moving. I love it.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

3 posted 2001-10-23 10:06 PM

your pome is numero uno, doc!!

wonderful writing, as always!!!

Andrew Scott
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since 1999-06-24

Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA

4 posted 2001-10-26 11:47 AM

MOST EXCELLENT! Really like the style and the feel... strong word choice. In a word, "Quality." Now back to the top you go! I bow to you and yours. Peace to you Doc!

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

5 posted 2001-10-26 11:50 AM

Enjoyed, as always, Doc. Your lines are pretty smooth as well!

SmittenKitten
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since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

6 posted 2001-10-26 12:18 PM

Doc~ who wouldn't melt upon hearing this request? Nicely expressed...I enjoyed it!

Hugs,
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

Lady In White

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since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

7 posted 2001-10-26 12:22 PM

Ah Good Doctor, the grass always does seem a little greener on the other side...

Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

8 posted 2001-10-26 06:25 PM

Excellent!

*smiles*

~Tier

Dr.Moose1
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since 1999-09-05

Posts 3448
Bewilderment , USA

9 posted 2001-10-26 09:56 PM

Startime ,
Thank you . She's a harsh mistress at times , at others , very forgiving . Such is this plight we choose . Thanks again .
Doc
Tracey ,
Thanks , I'm glad you liked . Thoughts into words , if they don't lose too much in translation we've done our job .
Doc

Doreen ,
Emoting here , emoting there , how else to
express ourselves ? Your reply is much appreciated .

Drew ,
Ow ! When you were bowing I was too , we must have smacked heads !Thanks pal .
Doc
serenity ,
Thank you . Yours' is a rather unique talent , which makes your comments all the more appreciated .
Doc
Smitten ,
Thank you , but melting things is my buddy Drews forte'. He does some pretty wonderful things with wax .
Doc
Lady in White ,
A different observation , but no Freudian slips or quips here . Thanks ,
Doc
Tiersden,
Thank you . Glad you liked it .
Doc

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