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Lily Of The Valley
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Lily Of The Valley |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 Lily Of The Valley By: Noah Eaton 10/23/01 Deep in the garden of my heart you rest Kissed by the spring showers of every brand new day Lavender dreams paint sweet lovers skies Jojoba intimacies quill at every betrothal made Bluebell eyes dreaming away in passions meadow Lifting up into the lingering kiss of a blue-eyed Mary Cinnamon desires sifting about in the scattered leaves Enchanting visions of my sweet lady lily-of-the-valley Murmuring cupid’s coos in a bed of ivy Passions flowing hot in the night in temptation Candles burning romantic embers in dreaming Fulfilling visions of love sweet seduction Gazing into misty sapphire eyes of sheer delight With crystal tears falling, happily embraced I now feel the warmth from the girl of my dreams Sunshine gleams on my lily-of-the-valley every time I look at her lovely face… |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
   What a poem! You hopeless romantic. (smiling) Romance is the best. Noah, have you found that lily you've been searching for? |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Midnitesun, thank you for the beautiful compliment, it made me smile! (big hugggssssss) (sad sigh) No, I haven't found her yet; I turn 18 this Sunday and I have yet to fall in love but when I find her, I dream of such this sweet first kiss! (smiles) God Bless you, sweet friend, you're always such a joy to have around! I love you all! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Happy hunting Noah! You will win her over with your words for sure. Nicely done. ~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Hope friendships will blossom into love for you...James |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
18 on Sunday, Noah we'll have to throw you a party!!! Lovely poem you've written sweetie. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Noah,' You have a very warm heart and a lot of beautiful things to say. Lucky is the one to be subject of your poetry. THis is very lovely and romantic Liz |
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BtwnRockandHardPlace Member
since 2001-10-23
Posts 98NJ, USA |
Happy Birthday! A mere 18, your words are showing much more wisdom than your years! *~*~*~*~ Benita *~*~*~*~ The truth of the matter is that you always know the right thing to do. The hard part is doing it. -Gen. Norman Schwarzkoff [This message has been edited by BtwnRockandHardPlace (edited 10-25-2001).] |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
this is lovely, Noah. -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Noah, this is wonderful, you used so many interesting visuals. And what a beautiful love song for a special girl. Sandra |
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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
Noah, This is a beautiful poem.....I hope you find love soon. Its a wonderful thing to be in when you find the right person. hugs, ~Laura~ |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Noah, this is beautiful, but give it time. so young you have so much ahead. Look into the eyes of a man and |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I echo A Whispers Caress, take your time, you have so much ahead of you, BUT when you do find her.... watch out "Lily of the Valley!  I enjoyed. Maree  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Party? Did someone say Birthday party?? I didn't get an invite!! This is lovely Noah and I am sure you will find that specail someone soon....I shall wave my magic wand and try to make one appear! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
 Happy 18th Birthday, Noah!  Lily of the valley by Crabtree & Evelyn is my favourite perfume ~ it's so delicate, soothing and beautiful, just like your poem I'm a hopless romantic too, and I love this! I'm saving it in my library.Have faith, you'll find your soulmate one of these days ~ but, in God's time, I truly believe that He creates that perfect someone for each of us, and only He can deliver 'the one' to you, so have patience m'friend! You'll find her when you least expect her!Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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