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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-10-22 06:38 AM

Sustenance

Last evening, late
my weakness arrived,
a craving, a hunger, a yearn.

Syrupy~ images
drippings of you,
taunting of dreams to return.

Oozing of memories
trickled on down,
steadily to influence taste.

Not in best judgement
aroused to the will,
to placate myself, Yes, in haste.

Vanilla and almonds,
caramel 'n cream,
chocolate syrup to spare.

Lips upon touching
let out such a sigh,
savoring each spoonful with flair.

To view me, in splendor
with thoughts smoothly sweet
flowing, discharging a rush

These memories of you
with syrupy~ thoughts,
left me dreaming in colors of blush.

~Wynter

(Dessert was my dinner last evening *s)

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 10-22-2001).]

Kit McCallum

Administrator

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2001-10-22 06:42 AM

What a luscious and dreamy dessert Maureen! Wonderful imagery, much enjoyed!

Best wishes,
/Kit

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

2 posted 2001-10-22 07:25 AM

You know, Maureen, I have been overindulging in sweets lately too. I think there is a reason(man) behind this

sandra

I believe this is heaven to no one else but me, and I will defend it as long as I'm left here to linger in silence...Sara McLachlan

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2001-10-22 10:23 AM

Oh what a beautiful morning~~~
oh what a beautiful day~~~

thank you Kit and Cat
haaaaaa, I just couldn't resist *s Perhaps it's true

Hope all is well with both of you...

Maureen

* I must try that again..seems to sweeten my spirits or at least give me a pick me up.*s

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

4 posted 2001-10-22 10:31 AM

Wow! I like this.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2001-10-22 10:49 AM

Wow! Thanks, Sweet Chick ..oh that was Smart Chick wasn't it *s
Sweet and Smart, thank you.

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

The Lady of Shallot
Senior Member

since 2001-10-03

Posts 818
USA

6 posted 2001-10-22 01:42 PM

and not a thing wrong with that, if you enjoyed it!!!!!

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

7 posted 2001-10-22 02:14 PM

Wow! I gained five pounds just reading this

Howizit one gets to the Crescent City?

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

8 posted 2001-10-22 02:25 PM

sometimes it is just wonderful to indulge Wynter. Enjoyed this delicous desert.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

9 posted 2001-10-22 03:45 PM

Sounds absolutely delightful ... even your words appeared to glow!!
If the taste is appealing, try some Butterscotch the next time around ... it takes on a flavor all its own. **s**

Good job!!

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

10 posted 2001-10-27 04:22 AM

Wynter-
   Oh my...now I really MUST find something
   sweet to eat!  LOL!
   Enjoyed this.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

11 posted 2001-10-27 04:29 AM

It's a good thing it's too late to eat, or I'd have to grab something sticky, gooey and sweet!

DawnG

Senior Member

since 2000-06-23

Posts 1494
United States

12 posted 2001-10-27 02:11 PM

Nakdthoughts,

Yummy. This poem is so wickedly sweet. Now where's my chocolate? LOL.

Dawn

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

13 posted 2001-10-27 02:14 PM

(smiles) Mmmmmmmm...reminds me of my poem "Raspberry Delight" (smiles) I love all kind sof desserts, but raspberries and cream are my favorite! (smiles) This is such a sensual and lovely piece, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Wynter, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

14 posted 2001-10-27 02:55 PM

How dreamy....filled with all the sweetness that we crave. Absolutely the tastiest poem I have read in a long time. BRAVO!!!

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

15 posted 2001-10-27 03:50 PM

I'm trying to lose lets say ten pounds and all I can think of is pecan pie...I think that will be my lunch...how do you stop with one piece...James

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

16 posted 2001-10-28 02:21 AM

nakdthoughts,
Are you sure this is about dessert?

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