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Oh, Bull!
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Oh, Bull! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States 
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Oh, Bull! By Larry Chadwick Mom said I could only play until five, Be back on time and you’ll stay alive. It seemed that I had just barely begun, I waited too long like a boy having fun. At seven I couldn’t read the clock well, I knew I was late by the chimes of the bell Following the road would make me late, A short cut would work, if I did not wait. So off through the fields I ran real fast, When would I ever learn from the past? Catching my breath, I froze at what I saw, A bull, so big, he could have been the law. Procrastination has its price they say, I was old enough, I was willing to pay. Puffing up my chest and moving ahead, Was it mom or the bull that I did dread? Just the fence separated that bull and I, I stood there glaring him in the eyes. Speed was my weapon, it was plain to see, Without a clue what surprise was waiting for me. I held on tight, I would just jump straight thru, Instead, power surged through the fence and me too. I fought and danced trying hard to pull away, At that moment, I knew I would die today. One last desperate effort to break free, Strength, untold, welled up inside of me. My hands finally flew into the air, Maybe life really could be fair. But no! I stumbled and backed away, It wasn’t worth it just for time to play. Flat on my back I lay in the mud, This day really turned out as a dud. Sin isn't fair, but God got even, grace isn't fair either. larry c [This message has been edited by Larry C (edited 10-22-2001).] |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Your unique style is refreshing. And the humors a plus, too. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 And that's no bull! LOL again.Oh, LARRY, you really do have some Tails to unleash on us. This one is very, very good. Can't think of anything silly to add, except that in my similar case it was a goose. But then that's another story. |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Oh Larry, You crack me up! Love it! Cindi |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Duncan, Thanks again Duncan, it sure is fun being here.  Midnitesun, And why aren't you sharing these Tails? I too have the chased by the goose terror to tell. LOL Cindi, Thanks, the joy of a silly childhood, I guess. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
And is this the new version of show me yours, I'll show you mine?  LOL. So, once upon a time there was this nasty nasty goose who lived at gramma's house. Grandma had a weird sense of humor, so she set that goose on the loose while I was in the backyard playing. She locked the door and stood and watched while goosey did his thing. And whenhe was done all that I was left wearing that day was a new birthstone ring. OK. There you have it. At least part of it, anyway.  |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Midnitesun, HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!! It sounds like that goose may have got your gander. Cause it seems it was accessible! ROTFLMAO |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
You have a comeback for everything, don't you. ROTFLMAO. Yep, I lost my gander that very day. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
It pays to listen to Mama, doesnt it? hehe this was good, I enjoyed. Maree |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Dark Angel, And how! Smartee. Thanks. Just one more explanation for who I became. LOL (Nice to meet you) |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I think we grew up on the same block Larry, LOL! I'm very much enjoying your stories, this was a wonderful weave, much appreciated.  Best wishes, /Kit |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
~Smiling Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
He he great fun! |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Another cute memory Larry, and a good one by Kacy too, I might add. This reminded me of a shortcut my step brother and I took one time after swimming. There was a huge mud hole and we decided we'd walk around the edges for fun, where the mud was hard. But I went in too far and ended up getting stuck in the mud to my waist. Some big boys had to come rescue me and carry me home. My brother was the one who got in trouble cause he was older, but it had been my idea all along!!! If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling* Oh how I love these. And I can feel the pure joy that flowed through this boy as he took pride in how fast he could fly with the wind. Running and running to win his race against time. BRAVO!!!! Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Very good. I enjoyed reading this one. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I enjoyed this very much... and yup... if it came to facing my mother's fury or a bull, I'd take my chances with the bovine. LOL. Great story!!! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Kit, Then you had a fun childhood! Coming from a great weaver that's a lovely compliment. Wynter, ~Grinning (real big) ethome, Thanks a bunch. Nice to meet you. Tracey, Traceys a stuck in the mud, I think she likes that crud. I'll bet her brother was mad, He wasn't even the one being bad. Startime, You do know how to get into my head. Glad you liked this and understood it so well. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) What a wonderful metaphor for running against time and making the most of life! (sigh) BRAVO!!! Wonderful work! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Larry, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Noah, You can respond to my stuff anytime! You are so kind.  |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Laugh~ You are so great! I love your humor and life! So many memories Sincerely, Regina |
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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
I loved it! Thanks for the laugh! ~Laura~ |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Regina, Wow! Thanks for the generous words. Laura, It's stress free as a memory. But reality was horrifying! LOL Thanks. |
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