Open Poetry #16 |
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Each Year's Measure |
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Martie
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Posts 28049California ![]() |
Each Year's Measure The rose lifts up each petal full in lavender beguile traced stretched out into the minute’s meaning it’s dusty purple is grace The curled lifting flag so draped within the garden’s tender attached by bamboo pole is simple meaning of what is splendor The heartbeat of the hammer heard upon some workmen’s bench gives rhythm to the neighborhood and normalcy behind my fence The leaves blow from the autumn tree across the grass of green and the squirrels make race on phone line freeway their winner heard not seen My heart with heavy loaded changes this day will start brand new for birthdays only come one time each year they measure you The minutes spent expanding mind and giving love away is cherished by the sound it makes when filling each day’s empty tray The music is the gold of wealth along the stormy path of years and the knowledge builds a monument from hugging smiles and tears My heart with heavy loaded changes each year they measure you for birthdays only come one time this day I’ll start brand new [This message has been edited by Martie (edited 09-22-2001).] |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Martie, this is wonderful ![]() |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~ This is as lovely as the lady that penned it~ Therefore .... it is beautiful ~ ~ Happy Birthday, sweet friend~ ![]() I love you, sweet sister of my heart~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~You have a way about you. That I enjoy more and more. I can't possibly thank you appropriately for the words and feeling that you stretch across these pages. Always a pleasure. Take care Martie. *Peace. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Happy Birthday Sweet Poetess Martie... this is a beautiful rhyme measure of time Thank you for sharing your B-day with us ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Well tomorrow holds only mystery |
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Soaringeagle Member
since 2000-12-06
Posts 156CANADA |
HEY MARTIE SUCH A LOVELY BIRTHDAY POEM BLESS YOU FOR YOUR SHARING WAYS SHALOM |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Some writings, only certain people can do. This one could only be done by a mother named Martie... |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
I love the way things look through your weaving heart Martie..you leave me in awe of your talent and make me feel very blessed to be here to read your work~ Happy Birthday Sweet Poetress~ |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful sentiments and phrasing within this piece Martie. Happy Birthday to a lovely woman who paints pictures for our minds through her words. ![]() Best wishes, /Kit |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
A beautiful piece You make a birthday into a living theater of the beauty of every day sights. What a pleasure to read Liz |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Happy Birthday, Martie! You'll be beautiful at any age! Cor |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, Happy birthday sweet. and the knowledge builds a monument from hugging smiles and tears Well done. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this is so beautiful, so beautiful, Martie. Thank you Kathleen |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
~* HAPPY BIRTHDAY MARTIE *~ Here it is your birthday, and you are giving us the present as usual! What a wonderful poem and I loved this stanza: The minutes spent expanding mind and giving love away is cherished by the sound it makes when filling each day’s empty tray I know this year you are going to have your tray filled shortly to overflowing! I smile even at the thought of that, what a birthday present! Again, Happy Birthday sweet friend, and thank you for your poetry, but moreso, for being you! ~* If you want a rainbow, sometimes you just have to put up with a little rain *~ |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
What a wonderful way to celebrate... by being 'measured' indeed.. Happy BirthdayDear Lady |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Martie, my sweet friend- I am SO sorry that I missed your birthday! What a lovely verse you've penned to celebrate your special day. ![]() Happy belated birthday! Love and hugs, ![]() ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
GEEZ, doesn't anyone tell me anything around here? HOW did I miss this? Sigh, I will only plead much older age, for Martie, you are only growing younger with your muse, which does so well..Happy Birthday then, gentle one, very gentle smile |
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Auguste![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
HAPPY BIRTHDAY, Martie. (((hugs))) ![]() Michael Auguste~ |
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