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Open Poetry #16
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SEA
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with you
0 posted 2001-09-22 04:58 PM


waiting for rain
to refresh and renew
to cleanse my heart
of this missing you

~*~

waiting for rain
to soothe this want
to wash away demons
that persist to haunt

~*~

waiting for rain
to fall upon me
and relieve my soul
of this misery

~*~

waiting for rain
that I love so dear
so that I may forget
you aren’t near

~*~
waiting for rain
mostly….for inner peace
to storm out these feelings
and grant me release

~*~

~SEA~
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Rex Allen McCoy
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1 posted 2001-09-22 05:12 PM

This is very beautiful Sea ... Waiting for rain to cleans the soul and all its' misfortunes so to speak
I love to sit out under the awning and watch a good rain or thunder storm ... it brings a certain renewal of spirit
RSEvans
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2 posted 2001-09-22 05:19 PM

May you have showers to soothe and downpours to deliver...
Titia Geertman
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Netherlands
3 posted 2001-09-22 06:37 PM

Really good, like them very much

Titia

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SmittenKitten
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where the sky and horizon meet
4 posted 2001-09-22 06:45 PM


SEA~ Ahh...rain can be so soothing.  I enjoyed this piece very much    Here's to some showers to comfort your soul!

Hugs,
~Krista

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And all you can do is to go where they can find you."
~Winnie the Pooh
Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2001-09-22 07:17 PM

SEA~
Smiles from here~
Very nicely done~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2001-09-22 07:21 PM

SEA...I enjoyed these very much.  Lovely indeed, especially if followed by a rainbow.

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~
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