Open Poetry #16 |
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.............Kismet Kiss............ |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA ![]() |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (smiles) Such a beautiful sensual kiss indeed! (big hugggsssssss) Licking honey from the lips, blushing butterflies against the chest, sooooooo beautiful! (sigh) You always write of the sweetest kisses, sweet Melissa, makes me think of kissing my dream girl all the time! Mmmmmmmmm! (big hugggssssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Melissa, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Melissa....whew, very sensual, and a bit erotic....this may end up in Adult ![]() ![]() [This message has been edited by SEA (edited 10-20-2001).] |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Whew, Melissa, ya got my heart racing there!!! This is a gorgeously sensual and romantic piece. Now I'm off for a cold shower. LOL If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
blush butterflies across my cheek, fly my whispers to passion's peak, send shivers down my spine... stop the rush of time, lose yourself in the glint of my eyes ~ sway with my soul, caress my breath, never let go, for, a kiss is not just a kiss when fate is intertwined when ecstasy is graced by your heart and mine ================================== have mercy girlie... me thinks ya been in me raspberry tea ![]() very very nice Melis... we all wish to know this kiss ![]() Beautiful inspire here. This distance has shown how the road remains alone |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Oh, WOW! Melissa the Man who captures your heart is going to have a big smile on his face twenty four hours a day!!!!Love ya! Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Melissa, Hot stuff, you almost brought me back to life LOL a wonderful write. |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
My husband dragged me out of the shower to read this. Wow, words can't say how much I enjoyed your poem. ![]() |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
So beautiful Melissa, what a romantic soul you have. Sandra |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
the Queen of Romance pens yet another poem of Passion and Fire. . . you know that I love this one. . . ![]() ---------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Whooo Hoooo! Sensual poem there Melissa, and I am laughing myself silly at JM (rasberry tea!), is that like Long Island Ice Tea - now you're talking! Try giving your smile to someone who does not have one, and I bet you'll find another ~*~ Mysteria ~*~ |
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Janette![]()
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
"with the taste of rapture's dew" Ahhhhh to be kissed like this is heavenly indeed! I am sooooo glad I did not miss this one...excellent write!!! I love it! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Thanks everyone! ![]() I've certainly been on a kiss fetish this last week, haven't I? ![]() ![]() "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Chelsea~ Member
since 2001-02-09
Posts 260Ontario, CANADA |
missy, This is so hot, girl! I now have a fav of yours! great stuff... ![]() |
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rosepetals25![]()
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Melissa, Wow chickie! What a way to jumpstart my morning! So romanitic and erotic! The man who inspired this isn't going to know what hit him ![]() ![]() Hugs, Tara Don't marry for money... You can borrow it cheaper! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
You little Deviless you! What are ya trying to do to us all? Whew this is going to carry the mood of passion and sensuousness into the minds of all the readers! Great pictures, but even more so well written! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Me a lil' ![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks Chels, Tara and Eric for your replies~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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