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Within your Maze
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Within your Maze |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London 
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Within your Maze ~~~ Tears transform a tranquill room expose a sleepless night Stumble over speechless sounds to liquify your sight My eyes could shut and call this dream slip back through slumber's door Though captured whys deflate serene deplete arouse deplore ~ I search within your eyes a light mear spark disperse of haze My touch caressed your salted cheek my thoughts within your maze A sudden hug you cling to me my heart surrounds you tight You turn away but snuggle close You smile and say Goodnight ... ~~~ |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh my Rex ... so many beautiful phrases within this delightful and romantic piece. The cadence and rhyme is superb my friend ... what a lovely and flowing verse. Very much enjoyed!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This tripped gently through silent reading, then in a whisper I said each word...and it was just as lovely in quiet reverence as it is in thought... well done, Sir... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Reads as soft and gentle as a lover's caress. Very well done Rex. ~smiles~ Nancy. ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~ |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Now you two ladies have gotten my head in a spin ... I think I like your replies better than I do my poem |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Lets make that three ladies ... you snuck in Nancy, while I wasn't looking |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
"My eyes could shut and call this dream slip back through slumber's door" REx, this is an absolutely lovely poem, soft in phrase and sentiment. Superb writing Liz |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I like this very much Rex it feels comforting |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Rex~ 'My eyes could shut and call this dream slip back through slumber's door' *sighhhhhhhs* Lovely thoughts~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Very calm and loving. I liked this much. God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very beautiful, Rex. Sandra |
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