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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597
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malaise The edge is lost lost in malaise a queasy stomach a nervousness of things done, or is it things undone I never know which Like a balloon (in there) swollen with fermented gas from a bad idea I wonder what is going on as I sit trying to distract myself with this scratching . . . While the cat crunches a leftover and howls for more © 10.19.01 |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh my gosh, sometimes I too feel nervous and then I get this same kind of queasiness! (big hugggssssss) Wonderful honest thoughts, dearest friend, you always write with such talent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
I wonder what is going on as I sit trying to distract myself with this scratching . . . Is it fleas do you think??!!  Sorry, just back from the pub and my mind works in strange ways after a couple of pints. Seriously, very interesting, introspective write.If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Angel - Thank you, but you are much too kind. I just write about what is in front of me, or thereabouts, whatever it is. Tracey - FLEAS? HaHaHa From the cat? Now be kind. My cat(s) wouldn't dare! (the 'scratching' pen, of course) And no, I've not been to the pub. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Krawdad, Now that would put even me on edge. Talk about a state of mind. However, you defined it well. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling* I am glad your cats wouldn't dare to share with you. Your pen scratches very well without having to scratch other things as well. You poem gives one pause to think, my friend. Well done. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Thanks Larry, I suppose it's either the edge or its associated 'plain' of existence. Thanks Startime, One does seem to have to pause in order to think these days. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
a nervousness of things done, or is it things undone I never know which Very cool write. Liked this part most. (Glad the flea thing was just a rumor!) |
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