Open Poetry #16 |
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words sweet and tender |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Words sweet and tender Meaning nothing to the sender A heart can render Leaving you with a bad taste for love Words sweet and tender Can sound like thunder To the mind of the lonely Slowly ripping it asunder My words soft and tender Now has ceased The love in my heart is deceased Words soft and tender Will no longer be written to you You left my life ~ took me out of view For I have written you But only got silence back No longer will my heart be uncovered for attack I am gone ~ forever to be alone I m burning bridges as I go I should have left a long time ago |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
I know the feeling and pain of "no reply"..... -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
it happens way to often...thanks for reading this |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Alan, she's a fool.....(((hugs))) for you ![]() |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
No Sea..she is one smart lady... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Alan this is awful! Oh..lol...not the writing , the theme!! You sound so sad.... (((hugs))) to you my friend! ~Nancy~
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
awwwwwwww Alan...there always is hope...that's what I am told. ((hugsss)) ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Nancy...thanks for reading.... Wynter.there is till you start burning bridges,,and walking away..which is what i am doing..thanks for reading this |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
You are so wrong...so wrong...she hasnt left you...dont you know you are ever in her heart? Every day? Every hour? |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big hugggssssss) Oh Alan, this is so so sad and my heart cries out to you! (sad sigh) Your heart is always so sweet and tender and it deserves to be felt and loved always! (big hugggsssssss) I pray that true love will fill your heart and forever her love will be true to you! (sad sigh) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Alan, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Oh Alan, such heartfelt sorrowful words. Haven't seen you round here for a while. Nice to see you back, and here's hoping that tomorrow brings a brighter day If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Love should not go where it is not appreciated...James |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Alan, When you let the past go the future begins. Enjoyed |
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Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
((warm hugs))) heartfelt penned!! Charisma |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Oh Alan, to think that such beautiful words such as yours are going to waste on the woman they are intended for. Luckily, the ladies here receive your words with such enthusiasm. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Well expressed even though it hurts, sometimes we don't know how to let go, but we must. Thanks for sharing |
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Domzi Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 288New York (BK) |
Sometimes it's hard to write about painful things, but you've expressed it well. As my borough has always stated- Do or Die. |
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