Open Poetry #16 |
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A Love To Cherish |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia ![]() |
You are as welcome as the sunshine After a dark and rainy night You're like a breath of fresh air Such a wonderful sight Half of me is sometimes missing Whenever you're not around How very blessed am I For this special love I've found A pair of star-crossed lovers Here we walk along the sand As you stop and turn to kiss me And our feet sink into the sand In your arms I so easily surrender As I feel the tenderness of your touch The hours that I spend with you They never seem to be enough A day without your love And my heart seems to lose its way Within the comfort of your loving arms Is where I'd like to stay Suetang |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Such a loving flow ... grasping yet releasing. I enjoyed this greatly! |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
I feel your yearning to be in his arms forever and wish you both joy and happiness. I love to read of people falling in love. Your write it beautifully. You surely have A Love To Cherish. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (sigh) Oh Sue, this is soooooooo romantic! (big hugggsssssss) Your beautiful golden heart sings such sweet love I just know you'll always cherish! (smiles) So beautiful, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
This is romance indeed. What lovely thoughts, what lovely images. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
a warm poem |
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DawnG![]() ![]()
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Sue, I'm still waiting for my love to cherish but your writing reminds me that it does exist and that it is worth waiting for. Dawn |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy ![]() |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
So much love created this beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
A day without your love And my heart seems to lose its way ......... I know this feeling.... ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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