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ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2001-10-19 06:52 PM

The Craven

It starts
beneath the ordinary
a tingling, an itch
a restless desire

It spreads
scratching only the surface
awakening possibilities
a delicate fire

A crave
is a relentless need
a Craven is a lost soul
a faceless liar

To some
always a burden
difficult to face
harder to admirer

A cowardly presence
never to discover
courageous dreams
which love may inspire

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

1 posted 2001-10-19 06:58 PM

This was so very well written and much enjoyed. Take care......Sue

Suetang

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

2 posted 2001-10-19 08:40 PM

BRAVO!!!!What a wonderful way of putting it. You have outdone yourself with this one, Craig. I LOVE IT AND ITS MESSAGE.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2001-10-19 08:46 PM

(smiles) WOW!!! You describe the rising fire of desire so wonderfully here, and the emotions it bears! (big hugggssssss) Well done, dearest friend, I love it! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Craig, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2001-10-19 08:49 PM

hmmmmmm, I like the way you compared Craven and craving..nicely done..nice form *s

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2001-10-19 08:57 PM

Wynter took the words right off my keyboard...therefore I echo Wynter.

Great write!! Nancy.

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

6 posted 2001-10-19 10:01 PM

nice thought provoking read o yuh!

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

7 posted 2001-10-19 10:51 PM

Once again I thank you all.
Noah and Walt - Thanks guys!!!
Karen and Sue - I am glad you enjoyed.
Wynter - thank you for commenting on my form!
Nancy - Et tu

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