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True Love |
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NightShadow Member
since 2001-09-04
Posts 127New Jersey |
A man stands alone wondering where he went wrong why he hurts why anyone cares The Man, wanders finding whatever he can to boost him up wondering why he is stuck here why is he being tortured The man, still wanders hating himself hating his mistakes wondering why he did them in the first place The man, stumbles upon a woman a beautiful creature one, that loves him cares for him but he doesn’t know why The woman, continually loves the man, doesn’t know what to do he just sits there.. and takes it but he is still blue The man, wanders hurting for that wasn’t the woman he loved The wrong woman came into his life broke his heart, and made him hate himself The man, ever so wanders his feet getting sore his arms feeling like nothing his heart, about to give up The man, stumbles upon a woman a wondrous creature in all her beauty the man, finally smiles happy knowing she didn’t leave him The woman, seems to be in a shell but she too, is happy for loving this man is the only thing she could do For she loved him, forever. The man, takes the woman the wander together forever happy in the bliss of love true love __________  Dedicated to my husband..A Life without Love, is no life at all... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
NightShadow~ What a lovely piece written with love for your husband~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
What a lovely tribute..well written.. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
how very sweet  I liked the way this plays out nicely done |
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