Open Poetry #16 |
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Heart's Eclipse |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Heart’s Eclipse In an eclipse of emotions the foolishness of a schoolgirl preys on her dignity… shamelessly tossing aside any self-pride she lays her heart out, open and exposed… a casualty of her own obsession. achildsheart 10-19-01 Poetic verse nestled in the warmth of my heart, reveals the sweet yearnings of my soul.... [This message has been edited by A Whisper's Caress (edited 10-19-2001).] |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
innocence is bliss...I like this |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (sigh) The beauty of innocence fills the heart of this little girl in this wonderful poem! (smiles) The beauty of our hopes and dreams is what makes us special! (big hugggsssss) Wonderful poem, dearest friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Annie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely...very delicately penned. ~hugs, Nancy~
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
are they childlike dreams magnificent obsessions grownups can dream too Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* the innocent dreams of a childs heart. I think we still have many of those dreams but we have just lost sight of them. BRAVO!!!! Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Thanks everyone, for the kind remarks. I tried a different style with this piece, hoping to convey a different message than what was actually drawn, but I do appreciate the comments. The meaning was how foolishly we revert to schoolage antics, mking huge jackasses out of ourselves, when we can't let go..... Poetic verse nestled in the warmth of my heart, reveals the sweet yearnings of my soul.... |
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