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suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

0 posted 2001-10-19 11:11 AM

The bed was so empty without you last night.
I tried cuddling a pillow and holding it tight,
But stared at the ceiling as the room grew light
And another day began.

I've never experienced what you make me feel.
Is this a fantasy? Could it be real?
Sometimes I fear my response reveals
More, perhaps, than it should.

You kiss me and all conscious thought recedes;
I'm reduced to a creature of wants and needs
That touches and worships, tastes and pleads
For fulfillment in your arms.

I'm still not sure what kind circumstance
Brought about this dream romance,
But I'd sell my soul to be given the chance
For one more hour with you.

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

1 posted 2001-10-19 11:18 AM

Oh yes, one more hour indeed...welcome home, suthern....we've missed you....

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2001-10-19 11:19 AM

SuthernGal~
This spills tears across the page~
Somewhere out there a heart is aching~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

3 posted 2001-10-19 11:41 AM

That can happen when your married or single o yuh! Good write and good to see you.

dolphin
New Member

since 2001-10-16

Posts 5
Florida, USA

4 posted 2001-10-19 11:58 AM

When you do get that one more hour, do not let it pass idly.

Beautiful words and so heartfelt. This poem really spoke to me.

"Love is like pi - natural, irrational, and very important."
- Lisa Hoffman-

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

5 posted 2001-10-19 12:16 PM

A poem from the heart is very good. Thank you for sharing it.

jellybeans
Member Elite

since 2000-10-13

Posts 2298

6 posted 2001-10-19 01:05 PM

wow lady.....just love the way you write....sigh...course I just want to tell you that this one doesn't help my mood today...nope not one bit...
oh? what's that, you didn't write it for me? *bg*
hugs and love from one COWAN to another

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

7 posted 2001-10-19 01:10 PM

Lovely write - enjoyed. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

LngJhnAg
Member Elite

since 1999-07-23

Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

8 posted 2001-10-19 03:07 PM

Belle - Such a sweet poem of need. You are such a wonderful writer, and I'm never disappointed in what you write.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

9 posted 2001-10-19 03:09 PM

Very nicely penned. Enjoyed so much, Nancy.

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Andrew Scott
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since 1999-06-24

Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA

10 posted 2001-10-19 03:23 PM

Hey there Lady Suthern... Has that rag of a Toe gone afoot again? Shame on him to leave such as you all alone. I will say your offering here is filled to the brim with emotion... well done... liked the flow and style.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

11 posted 2001-10-19 03:36 PM

Suthern....this is superb...I like the way
you rhymed the first three lines and then
closed with a unique fourth line. Very nice
poem, I must say...

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

12 posted 2001-10-19 03:40 PM

Hi Ruth..your poem is so full of feeling and heart hurt. Well done! Hugs!

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

13 posted 2001-10-19 04:41 PM

gr8 hugs to you

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

14 posted 2001-10-19 05:03 PM

Lady in White: There are times when I'd settle for just 5 minutes... too bad the soul market is so depressed. *G* Thank you very much... for reading and for your kindness. *S*

Marge: Well... it's not my fault. *G* It was already ripped out, so I threw the thing away... and it had better NOT find its way back home. LOL. Thank you, sweet lady... for everything. *S*

wayoutwalt: Since I know far more about single than married, I'll take your word for it... but I sure HOPE marriages would be that committed. *G* Thank you... and it's good to see you, too. *S*

dolphin: If ever miracles happen, I will. *S* A poet can ask for no more than to touch another... thank you very much! *S*

SmartChick: Thank YOU for reading! *S*

jellybeans: But... but... but... at least you READ it! LOL. I'd begun to think the dern thing put every recipient comatose... so believe me, this got posted ONLY because you survived a read. *G* ROFLL @ COWAN... I do love you, O&O!!! Thank you! And a big ole ditto to that "love the way you write" thing. *S*

Nightshade: I'm so glad... thank you! *S*

LJA: You honor me, dear friend... but yanno, Lor's gonna have my hide if I go wipin' tears on your shoulder... so I'll just send a heartfelt thank you and pretend you didn't just make this ole biddie cry. *G*

Enchantress: Thank you... I'm glad you liked! *S*

Andrew Scott: That fleet-footed Toe's appearances are as rare these days as they are appreciated... and you know he IS appreciated! *G* Thank you, kind sir... I'm so glad you liked this style... your well done is greatly valued. *S*

Magnus: You just made my day! *S* Thank you so much for liking... it's odd, but me. *S*

Martie: So my stiff upper lip act just didn't work, hunh? *G* Thank you so much, kind lady... for both the well done and the hugs... both mean much to me. *S*

Interloper: Thank you so much... for both the read and the hugs. *S*

And if I seem to have accepted sympathy and concern cavalierly, please forgive me. I think I missed the mark with this one, even though it's one of my favorites from 40 years of scribbling. *S* For it's not supposed to be sad... it was written when I was feeling like the luckiest woman in the world, with a heart full of hope, wonder and beginnings, just waiting for that next meeting. *S* I do appreciate each and every comment... and thank you all for reading and caring. *S*

[This message has been edited by suthern (edited 10-20-2001).]

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

15 posted 2001-10-20 12:57 PM

Sigh. This sounds familiar. You express the feelings so beautifully. I really like this piece

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

16 posted 2001-10-20 01:26 AM

Suthern,
Pure passion. I could get hooked on this! Count me in. Thanks.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

17 posted 2001-10-22 09:00 AM

Tracey: Thank you so much... I'm very glad you like. *S*

Larry C. It is addictive, isn't it? *S* Too dern bad it's always been fleeting! LOL. Thank YOU... very much.

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