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Open Poetry #16

Hear The Silence

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

0 posted 2001-10-18 09:31 PM

Hear The Silence

The sun sets in a brilliance of scarlet
Purple shadows lengthen across the sands
Peacefulness comes from the painters pallet
Velvet darkness across the sky expands
The stars sparkle like diamonds in the night
A falling star leaves a trail of bright fire
Reflection of the moon casts gentle light
Soft breeze caresses two filled with desire
Strong arms encircle one whose moans emit
Passion flows in the blood of love that's grown
Falling under the moons spell they submit
Sharing the sweetest moment they have known
With lips they taste of each others essence
They can't hear the silence, in loves presence

Karen Torbiak 2001©

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

1 posted 2001-10-18 09:41 PM

Wonderful sonnet,
I listen to the silence
When ever I can.

Gloom

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

2 posted 2001-10-18 09:48 PM

Ah I love those last two lines

With lips they taste of each others essence
They can't hear the silence, in loves presence

So romantic. sigh.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

3 posted 2001-10-19 11:40 AM

silence comes after
when emotions have simmered
and we remember

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

4 posted 2001-10-19 12:12 PM

Very, very good. Another good one you did write.

sunshinemist
Senior Member

since 2001-09-29

Posts 595
Fl. sunshines early mist

5 posted 2001-10-19 12:38 PM

Very Beautiful words and expressions. Enjoyed. ~hugs~

smiles ~Marie~
happiness is contentment of the heart

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

6 posted 2001-10-19 01:19 PM

Another well-painted piece, sculptured from passion and desire.
Excellent sonnet!!

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