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Palette Perfect |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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 Palette Perfect mushroomed beige loom my beginnings, exposed in simple nudity, you see me situated before you, living awaits me in color jeweled pigments soon adorn me in spots and dots of crimson and cadmium lemon streams of manganese violet silked with ultramarine blue shall swath my shoulders, while cobalt teal and antwerp blue titivate my curves windsor emerald shall elevate status, as other tints and blushes, shades and traces come to call, in their blendings and swirls without regard of line or context, paying no heed soon, soon, my once pale countenance is but a congealed artifice and naivety vanished in black perhaps it is best if I were to stay in a state of nudity by remaining mushroom beige, allowing you alone to blush me your favorite shade of red |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*grin* who would not want to take this and cover it with colors of their own passions. Sunshine you have created a sensual delight of exotic colors to please the senses. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
allowing you alone to blush me I love this!!! Well done. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Squeeze me out I’m the black, Darken and shading when you need, Covering just a bit where colors lack You painted a fine poem indeed Gloom |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
From a bland and featureless canvas leap words of myriad and hopeful colors. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Blushing with beige beginnings, rainbows splashing about, your poem is so good, it makes me want to shout! In technicolor if that's possible, or is that techni-audio? |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ And in one brush of verse ... you touched both the artist and the poet in me~ Thank you ... it's a gem~  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
This strangely reminded me of "wish me a rainbow, wish me a star", and it felt good! ~I always have time to listen to someone talking from their heart~ |
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Nature Girl Junior Member
since 2001-10-19
Posts 31 |
Wow! certianly blushing here ... this was gorgeous! Invigorating!  |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nicely done! good progression of images and the blend of sensual just enough to whet the readers mind for more... |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Karilea - This poem was about painting? Painting? I thought it was about your latest trip to the tatoo parlor! Geesh. It is still a good poem, but now I've gotta read it again to get the 'appropriate' mental images - lol. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Amazing images....Well done!! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) How wonderful and exciting it is to mix and blend colors together on a palette and create magic before your very eyes! (big huggggsssss) I love it! Your beautiful words paint such beautiful colors! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
perhaps it is best if I were to stay in a state of nudity by remaining mushroom beige, allowing you alone to blush me your favorite shade of red ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Love this...I DO!! Karilea...this is so sensual... and the colours! Wow! Great write! ~hugs, NancyLee~
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Big grins here  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea--no matter if you hide in beige of page..you are color-filled and blooming! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Karilea- Oh...this is awesome! Beautifully penned masterpiece, my friend. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOO YUH |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
every time I read your poetry, I make a wish, I wish to write like you maybe someday |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
Oh, gosh, this is sooooo outstanding. Sterling presentation! -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
There's only one way to create shades on sunshine ... and I believe that requires an eclipse of sorts gotta love this poem |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This is a very 'visual' piece - That makes it a special treat for your reader...  I liked it every bit as much as the rest have...  |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Picture Perfect... Wonderfully written, my friend, Karilea. Regards, Sudhir |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Saving this one!!! Oh to be painted in blush from crush of another. Amazing write. You are so grand a poet! Sincerely, Regina |
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