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{{{My Sea is Endless }}}
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
 ~~~ My sea is endless ~~~  Thank you artist: Danny Hahlbolm Moon And Back Graphics: http://www.moonandbackgraphics.com [This message has been edited by MyEnchanted_Melody (edited 10-18-2001).] |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
A beautiful presentation.... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Nice flow and graphix, though I almost had to chase after that wave of words, it scrolls a little too fast for me. |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
~Lady in white~ Thank you. I thought of trying using such presentation. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Midnitesun~ I've edited it and made it scroll a bit slower....I hope it seems better now. Thank you for your kind words. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
ABSOLUTELY STUNNING!!!! I love it!!! Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
How did you do that? Really neat. Great poem too. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Lovely phrasing MyEnchanted_Melody ... your words compliment the picture beautifully, very nicely done!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
~Starttime~ I'm glad that you loved it..... Thank you dearly for the sweet comment  ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Tracey~ Well, I'm not sure how....I spent a long time trying and trying till it came the way it did. I hope it proved to worth the time and the efforet. Thank you soooo much ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Kit~ Thank you so much for your kind words ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ [This message has been edited by MyEnchanted_Melody (edited 10-18-2001).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
a very unique presentation. . . one that lends itself to many things. . . well done my friend. . . --------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MyEnchantedMelody~ Nicely done. Danny does some really inspirational artwork~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wow - what an awesome presentation and poem! Excellent! I love it!Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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cottage Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 138 |
awesome! |
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Nature Girl Junior Member
since 2001-10-19
Posts 31 |
Oh, wow! I want to learn those scripts! lol ... I could hear the melody in this... as waves would sing the shore... ahh, lovely. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thank you, thank you, for slowing the scrolling a bit. This is so cool, I feel like I'm watching the waves. I miss them. I used to live by the beach in California, but now live in the middle of Alaska. The graphics you chose are exquisite! |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
~Sven~ Thank you dear friend as always ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Marge~ I'm glad that you loved it. And Danny certainly has some very breathtaking works. Love ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Melissa~ I'm very happy that it was nicely welcomed..... Thank you dearest... & take care you too ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Cottage~ Well, Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Nature Girl~ I'm honestly still not sure how I managed to do it...It really took a long time. I'm so very glad that you have loved this melody.... Thank you dearly ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Midnitesun~ It was my pleasure... The waves are always enchanting...aren't they? I'm glad that this reminded you of such beautiful days. I also miss the waves.....  Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
"Take these broken wings and learn to fly again..." This is a melody/song I haven't heard for a few years and brings back some memories... My Melody, you are expanding our virtual universe with multi-media. Nice touch although I don't think I want to know how much programming code went into it -- I'm just happy with the result. Mysterious mentionings here... if your sea is endless, how does one reach shore? How warm is the water? Are there any sharks? Icebergs or islands? And what about the Bermuda Triangle--is it anywhere in the vicinity and if so, where will it take a courageous sailor? -MVS "Learn to let go of fear, doubt, and disbelief..." --THE MATRIX |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
~Mark~ "Take these broken wings and learn to fly again..." I don't really think I've heard that song... Oh......Yeah, so many messy codes were needed to make this and I'm not sure now how it happened...BUT I'm happy that you are happy with the result.... "Mysterious mentionings ", Mark??!! and such questions...!! reach the shore? Why one would want to reach the shore if he is forever enchanted with that sea and would find in it all that he longs for...? How warm is the water? That would depend on the wind....wouldn't it? Sharks are the sea's guardians....they might come when they are needed. Icebergs or islands .....might be there, a danger or a resting place. It depends. Bermuda Triangle?!! I'm not sure... I know that there is an Atlantis that has never been reached or seen.....and so a legend it has been though it is there, gently protected and guarded..... Mark, did I solve the mystery?.... Thank you dear friend..... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
My Melody, the song you selected for your poem here is by an 80's band known as Mister Mister, and is called, "Broken Wings." I'm sure you can get more info about them/it on the Net. Solve the mystery...? My Enchanted One, you've just added to it...  MVS"Learn to let go of fear, doubt, and disbelief..." --THE MATRIX |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh how very very beautiful. And the words speak to me, and they are words I want to say to him..but he would not hear. Wonderful, and someday you must tell me how you make these beautiful presentations, also. Sandra |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssssss) ABSOLUTELY BREATHTAKING!!! Your sea is endless indeed, and it always flows with such loving inspirations and sweet timeless love from your heart! (smiles) I LOVE IT!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
~Mark~ Thank you dear for the tip. I'll see what I can find on the net. Did I add to the mystery? ooooooops!  I didn't know... Thank you dear friend..  ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~` ~Sandra~ Wlcome back dear... I'm sure he'd listen with all his heart one day......He should.. ANd yes, I'd love to do that for you one day... Thank you {{{Hugs}}} ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Noah~ Thank you sooooo much and thousands big hugs to you sweet lady.. I'm so glad that this proved to warth the hectic time I spent on its presentation... Thank you.... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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