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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-10-17 11:59 PM

Obtain

I wish I were
a dream of yours
so I could feel
how moonlight endures
and press you
against black velvet sky
alone with stars
just you and I
then slowly take
a midnight dance
to carry us through
daylight’s romance
trading stars for sun
then back again
this is a dream
you can obtain

"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare

[This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (edited 10-18-2001).]

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

1 posted 2001-10-18 12:00 PM

i like this dream of yours yuh yuh

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

2 posted 2001-10-18 12:03 PM

Helen, I love this!~

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

3 posted 2001-10-18 12:12 PM

Oh yes, you took the best of romance and put it all together within one wonderful poem. MAGNIFICENT. I LOVE IT!!!

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

WindWalker
Senior Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 1218

4 posted 2001-10-18 10:43 AM

This was a very good poem!!!!!!!!

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

5 posted 2001-10-18 10:54 AM

I wish you could walk in dreams,
Beneath moonlight beside streams,
To be beside another in walking
Sharing thoughts without talking,
To watch the shimmer of moonbeams,
Stay in such dreams never waking,
I hope your searching lets you find
What dreams seek within your mind.

Gloom

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2001-10-18 10:55 AM

1Slick_Lady,
Nice write, how much are the tickets?

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

7 posted 2001-10-18 09:08 PM

beautiful.....

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

8 posted 2001-10-18 09:23 PM

What a beautiful dream.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

9 posted 2001-10-19 12:19 PM

Nicely wished, lady

"against black velvet sky
alone with stars
just you and I"

ah, that black velvet . . .

where once awash in the foaming sea
black velvet returns to now be free
stands there against the night sky deep
and blends into the stars we'll keep

sweet dreams . . .

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