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As a Child
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As a Child |
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DiamondsandRust New Member
since 2001-10-17
Posts 1 |
As a Child I never danced enough as a child I just kissed the walls like a new Best Friend A small helpless wild Now is at an end Some should say play more as a child Grass stains and football once life's dust an eternal desire To remain forever wild Because no child is a liar One should live in a box as a child So that he may never choose to leave and all the mothers Can keep their little Jesus quiet and mild Distant from his brothers |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Very interesting poem. Welcome to Passions...I know you will love it here...everyone is great. As to little children.....I have raised a couple and I think we need to teach them as best we can giving as much of a balance to their lives as possible. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Welcome. Yes, children should play, and also go out to test the world for themselves, outside of the sheltering arms of mom. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Welcome to Open !  Nicely done~  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
Welcome here o yuh I liked the References and the Write o yuh |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! An interesting, intriguing first write! Please check your e-mail for a special Greeting! Karilea |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Great first post! Will be looking for more from you!  WELCOME TO PASSIONS!! ~Nancy Lee~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Welcome to Passions!! Very interesting first post. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Diamond, Welcome, enjoyed and all's well that ends well. |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
yes, no child is a liar, welcome to the forum! -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Welcome to Passions. I look forward to your future work. |
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