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Soulmates Intertwined |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments 
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A moment is poised In twinkling, crystal sanctity As ever so softly, A hallowed breath is drawn And ancient devotion is relived Within the quiver Of a single sigh. The luster of a lover’s eyes Breeches the confines of time To glimmer in her dreams... The magnificence of him Still renders her breathless, Even from far beyond The shadowy twilight of death. The tendrils of her spirit Wind tightly around his memory (soulmates intertwined) And the sacred embrace Of a cherished, immortal love Is relived in every shiver Of her dying body. A final sparkle of energy Exhales from her limbs As she finally chooses the moment To live in his waiting arms Eternally. *Krista Knutson* |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
If you ever get carded for tryin to gamble smoke or drink the alcohol just show them how adult your writing is o yuh this rocks |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
This is really quite a beautiful story of two lovers re-uniting in eternity. Good imagery. "A final sparkle of energy Exhales from her limbs As she finally chooses the moment To live in his waiting arms Eternally." |
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Dusk Treader
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since 1999-06-18
Posts 1187St. Paul, MN |
Beautiful writing as always, dear heart. A tale of love rendered grandly. I can feel the shivers of her body as life leaves her and yet she seems enraptured, called into the unfailing arms of her love. It pains me that love like that is taken from this earth, but fills me to brimming with joy that they will forever be joined. Loved this piece greatly, last breaths and first moments of this woman's life. Wondeful, precious  "Beat a drum for me, like a butterfly wing |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* eternal love, what could be more perfect than to spend eternity with your soulmate? Forever intertwined in their loving embrace. BRAVO!!! I LOVE THIS ONE. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Krista~ Tender ... oh, so tenderly done~ *and LOL ... just what Walt said~  This is truly a touching piece~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
A beautiful story of love Krista. A Very dreamy and tender write. Love it! Maree  |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Well now........look who is showing off AGAIN!!!!!!!!! Seriously, it is always a treat to read your works as you have a unique way of expressing yourself that tends to make the rest of us try harder. Wonderful treasure you have given us and btw...I am still waiting for that autographed piece. LOL You didn't think I would let you off the hook did ya? |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Thank you all so very much for your kindness, I truly appreciate it!  And Mark, I totally forgot! Please forgive me? I think I still have your address somewhere in my mailbox....if not, could you send it to me at [email protected] ? Thank you!  *Krista Knutson* |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Krista- This is so tender and touching...another beautiful write from your pen. Much enjoyed. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Delicately woven, with a blend of devotion and endearing love Krista ... such a lovely read, beautifully written. Best wishes, /Kit |
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